[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for KJpoper[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Baby Wink![/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Baby Wink!

Author: KJpoper

Main Characters: Kim Jong In & Seo Hyun

Genre: Romcom

Status: Completed

Description of Story: She has a problem, she just can't control her right eye!

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 3.5/5

Your title is great; great but it doesn't grasp at me as a reader. Other may disagree with me and say that it's unique, and that may be yet… It wouldn't make me want to click it in any sense. 

Graphics: 9.5/10

I believe this looks beautiful, but the reason I didn't give it full create was because I didn't quite understand it. Furthermore, it's painful to my eyes as well as the background. (It still attractive though!)

Description and Foreword: 3/10

It's so vague that I was confused. The foreword didn't help either as I just sat there blank. The description an