"Tangerine Express"

Author: sarozu

Main Characters: Luhan, Yoona. Jaejoong, Taemin

Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Tragedy

Status: On-going

Description of Story:
When Luhan first meets Yoona, even the thought of being with her is a distant dream.
Little does he know that soon, that distant dream will turn into a hasty marriage, running away to raise half a set of twins, and carting kids around the Tangerine Express in a new life.
A life without Yoona.

Story Title: 3/5

Your title was unique and common. But I would be lying if I said it caught my attention and say I liked it. Because at first I was like ‘what’s with the title?’ I really didn’t like it but as I read your story and learnt the meaning behind it I was like ‘OMG I am so sorry I didn’t like your title! It is so sad!!!!” But I suggest you make it more catching next time.

Graphics: 5/10

I really didn’t like the poster. It didn’t have a feeling of tragedy nor family theme. At first I was like did I read the genre section incorrectly? But the background was okay except for the orange. I suggest you change it to suit your story more.

Description and Foreword: 10/10

Because I am still a student, I have nothing to correct you on. I loved how you told yo