[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for katakatica[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Unequivocal[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Unequivocal

Author: katakatica

Main Characters: Jiyong, Seunghyun

Genre: Angst, Drama, Fantasy/Supernatural, Romance,

Status: On-going

Description of Story: Wolves are terrifying creatures, but only if you don't know how to tame them. Jiyong learns this when he is taken in by a stubborn but stunning male, Seunghyun. The rest is well, history.

 

 

 

From Mirokochan ^^: I decided to do something new XD When the paragraph has a number 1 beside it, basically it's my first impression and then when it has the number 2 on it, it's after I read the story. This only applies to certain things like; story title, graphics, characterization & also Over-all enjoyment, what I first thought when I got this and took a glance and then afterwards ^^

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 2/5

1. (2/5) So since I'm not Albert Einstein or have an IQ of 180,000,000 XD I didn't know what Unequivocal, which is normal, so I searched it up and,meh. It's unique,original and i don't really know about it being relevant to the story yet but some people are lazy so they might not search up the meaning and leaving the story finding another one. So a suggestion is to put it in the foreword or description in BOLD ^^
2. (2/5) It's pretty much the same, still don't really understand why you decided to use Unequivocal, maybe explain that on a non-update ^^;

 

Graphics: 5/10

1. (5/10) Your poster is very whimisical like, kinda like a whimsical fairy and I liked how you poster was a scroll and not the typial 4A kind of ones. The only problem was the the font was super hard to read and I could hardly make out anything in it. Seeing as no-one put in their username for copyright I guessed you made it, so one thing to change is maybe the colour as it's mainly the thing covering up the background and any features underneath it. Right now I don't think it's relevant to the title as Unequivocal means leaving no doubt/ unambiguous and I think you should've done something that related to it more. Not saying it's bad but it was my first impression and how it was going to relate to the story. A poster paints an image of the story in your mind without having pictures throughout the chapters, you should pretty understand the story by the poster but for your one , it was...meh. :/

2. (5/10) After reading your story, I felt like you should've used other pictures, a wolf on a cliff howling and making the colours, midnight blue with a a hint of darkness and for the background use a dark blue fading into black background, as it does create suspense.

 

Description and Foreword: 8/10

When I read that, I thought it was going for the typical, Your a wolf, you can't love/like the fiflthy mankind called humans basically a misanthropy. I didn't like how you protrayed them as weaklings in your description who will bow down to their 'soulmate'. But then you wrote about how Seunghyun felt, so that cleared it up more. Now I thought it was going to be a girlxboy kind of fanfic as I don't read the tags for the story , so when it came to the foreword I was like shemurr XD Anyway so maybe clear that up with something like: THIS IS A FANFIC, THOSE WE ARE DISTURBED BY THESE SHOULD LEAVE....THANK YOU :). Thank you always helps XD I didn't like the description of the story mainly because you put in the part which will probably be already in the story;

It's him.

A deep voice growled in his head, causing him to snap back at it with a roll of his eyes. How could that thing be him? It was a small, flimsy human with mismatched eyes and dirty clothes. Sure, its smell was glamorous and its gaze alluring, but... it was just a human. Like many others.

Claim him, now...

The voice in his head was snarling now and Seunghyun cared not about it, thinking that his animalistic part had finally gone mad. He didn't want to associate himself with such a filthy mundane being. He scoffed as he took a few steps towards the skinny form of the human and smirked when it whimpered in fright, eyes quickly filling with salty tears from fear. How