"Into His Gravity"

Author: teukie_zeroed

Main Characters: Luhan, Maeri, Jinri

Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance

Status: On-going

Description of Story:
One mistake brought change in their lives. Maeri's one swift move, screw everything she has.
She lost him, she lost them. she lost her life. Everything was a mess, but he came back and picked her up from the mess she made.
She love him. Present tense. I love you too, that's what he said. She believed. She trusted him. She thought love was the only thing they need to keep them alive. She thought, they could move their relationship further as long as love is the center of it. She love him to the extent of claiming him as her's when he's not really in the first place. That little selfish move, and everything screwed up, again,
He loves her. He'll say he loves her but never said it while looking straight into her eyes. He said he loves her but screwed her on the first day of our surreptitious affair. He says he loves her up to the point of not wanting her to make friends anymore. It is love, yes,
He held her without touch, and kept her without chains. He said he loves her because she's fragile. But he touched her, and all her fragile strength was gone. She loved him, so much that over and over again, she fell into his Gravity.

Story Title: 3/5

Your title(s), Bestfriends & Into His Gravity aren't the best titles, to use if you want to be original, unique or stand out in the crowd, but it is relevant to your story, so I'll let you go on that one.

Bestfriends is the 'original' story and Into His Gravity is the sequel of it, and as you requested I will be reading both of them and judge you on 'Into His Gravity', if that made any sense at all XD 

Still none the less, it was good titles but they weren't unique enough for my liking, I'll give you 3 out of 5 as it's still relevant to the story ^^

Graphics: 10/10

Your poster was dark and very angst like, which fitted the mood and theme of this story nicely. It showed the two girls and Luhan, meaning there will be a love triangle, or kind of XD One of them is Maeri and the other is Jinri and then there's Luhan. Please correct me if the names are wrong. 

The font was hard to see, but it was still regonizable, and I liked how the colours matched with the whole them