Author: whiteknight

Main Characters: Kris and Chanyeol

Genre: Drama. Family. Fluff, Romcom, 

Status: On-going

Description of Story:
Sometimes life can get a little bitter, a little sweet, a little sour. Why don't you try some of my Fruit? It might add juicy sweetness into your life. Besides, a little of Fruit, after all, won't hurt right?

Story Title: 4/5

I have nothing to complain about this one. Your title fit your story well. It shows the fluff stories your created. But there’s only one thing that seems gone wrong, the story is a collection of one-shot that pairing KrisYeol right? And if that so, you need to tell the readers that it is a collection of one-shot. 

Graphics: 6/10

I’m sorry for this but your poster doesn’t relate to your story. It’s weird though. Your story is fluff and romance but the poster shows the drama and angst feel. I think you should choose a poster full fruits, colorful color scheme and Kris and Chanyeol must smile happily. This is my opinion. But still, the poster looks good.

Description and Foreword: 8/10

I love how you write the description and foreword. It’s neat and simple, just awesome. But there’s something to do with your grammar. I found minor error in both of your writing, and I think you should correct it. That’s somehow quite effect your description and foreword. 

Characterization: 8/10

Honestly, I don’t see any character development in your fanfic. I think maybe because your fanfic doesn’t finish yet. But still, I love how you made up Kris and Chanyeol character. It fits them well, and also rally fit your kind of story. I don’t have any problem regarding this part.

Plot: 30/40

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