[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for Miss_BAP[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Hoofbeats[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Hoofbeats

Author: Miss_BAP

Main Characters: Park Minhye, Horse, Daehyun

Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance

Status: On-going

Description of Story: “There is no secret so close as that between a rider and his horse.” Just like majority of the rich kids, Minhye lack the love that she should receive. With her parents working out most of the time, Minhye spends most of her time alone. Unfortunately, her parents business became bankrupt and they have to move back to their hometown, Busan. Even so, her life hasn’t change. Her parents work harder than before, always out day and night to earn money to move back to Seoul. During her stay she met her childhood friend, Daehyun. For starters, both of them didn’t really clique well. One fine day, she wonders off into the woods and finds an injured horse. Little did she know, she made a decision that will definitely change her life forever… “Horses changes lives. They give our young people confidence and self-esteem. They provide peace and tranquillity to troubled souls. They give us hope.”

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5

Very original, it captures the readers attention since some people tend to skim over storie titles that are common. I liked how you had something that was related to the horse but it wasn't common like - White Horse, Dark Horse ect ect. ^^

Graphics: 10/10

I liked it, the font was very easy to read as some times people tend to make it fancy which is nice but sometimes it's hard to read but