[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for chubbyfaceDiVa[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Kiss My Scar Away[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Kiss My Scar Away

Author: chubbyfacediva

Main Characters: Lee Gak (Yoochun) & Bo-yong (Pak Ha)

Genre: Romance,

Status: Completed

Description of Story: What if Bo-Yong were still alive when Gak returned? What if he managed to protect her and keep her by his side till death did them part? A story of what ifs and closure. 

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5

Title of the story you choose isn't cliche at all, it's very unique and it suits the story. Title 'Kiss My Scar Away' tell us that the story is about so many possibilities and like you said 'what if's'. So here you did good job. I didn't found stories with exact titles so here you choose good job. You made me to clique and to read your One-Shot :D

 

Graphics: 8/10

I have one question did you made both background and poster? Next time try to choose better texture for poster. You did well blending I am very jealous on that, the text is good but try to use some better type of text like...for example curisve text... I liked the background, it fits with story very well. That's why I took just two points. :)

 

Description and Foreword: 7/10

You gave short, but meaningful description, it makes me want to wonder about what is story telling us? What will happen in the end with characters? So here you did good job. But I wish in foreword that you could give like a short sneak peak into the chapter. Just only that, but other than that you did okay. Next time, when you are writing, note this:

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