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"Sighs and Smiles"

Author: pororokyungsoo

Main Characters: EXO's Byun Baekhyun and Park Chanyeol

Genre: Angst

Status: On-going

Description of Story:
The real question is, who is Park Chanyeol in Byun Baekhyun’s life.
A hallucination friend?
A friend?
A brother?
A partner?
Or even A lover?

The answer is only one, that only Byun Baekhyun can figures it out. He sighs.
The question is only one, focusing on only one, that only Park Chanyeol knows. He smiles.

 

  From Miro-chan: You don't have a chapter yet, so I can't really grade some of them but I'll try my best. ^^ Critique:

Story Title: 4/5

Your title Sighs & Smiles is boring. I didn't feel like I was excited to read it because it seemed like a cliche story that will probably have a girl and she gets into an accident and meets a guy who eventually makes her smile, or something similar. I felt like you didn't give enough thought into the title, you should think about: is it eye-catching, would it get someone's attention, would I read it, how do I feel about the title, should I leave it until I finish writing the story?

Something I learned was, never think of your title first, it will eventually come to you towards the ending or even the middle the story. You could be walking and suddenly and idea for a title pops up in your head. It isn't something you should force out of your head (If that made sense XD) ^^ 

 

Graphics: 0/0

You have no poster or backgrounds, background, I don't really care for, but posters are REALLY IMPORTANT. There's many places where you can request posters from like:

Spellbound Review & Poster Request Shop 
Sugadooly Graphics Shop
Sererô Graphic Shσp

They all make really good posters (Please check out Spellbound though XD)
Anyways, backgrounds aren't too important unless it's for an angst, dark, murder ,sad story, and your one I wouldn't really classify as any of those..YET. 

 

Description and Foreword: 5/10