"Dancing On Wheels"

Author: kememeng

Main Characters: Kris/Wu Yi Fan, D.O./Kyungsoo

Genre: Drama, Romance, , Slice of Life

Status: On-going

Description of Story:
And these “what ifs” killed Yi Fan every damn night and it was sad that
by 3 in the morning all Yi Fan could think of was that no matter how they
looked at it, he was the one who needs saving and sometimes, too desperately.
He didn’t know when or where it started, but he just knew this man,
struggling to stand was the greatest thing that happened to him. Wu Yi Fan…what am I going to do with you?
But he knew at some point, everyone says goodbye to their favorite things too, so Yi Fan did.

From yeolwho05: Your chosen reviewer, matchboxes, couldn't do your review
since she's busy, so I assigned it to another reviewer. I hope you don't mind.

Story Title: 5/5

Your title is well chosen. It successfully brings an emotional feeling and matches with your story perfectly. It's captivating and unique. I have no criticism on this section.

Graphics: 7.5/10

I like the first poster presented in the foreword. It's creative to show only their eyes, and the font is suitable. It also tells the readers right away what your story will included (aka wheelchair and hands clasping together). Personally, I think it would've been better if you made the wheelchair image in B&W, so it can match with the hands. Nothing major though. In comparison, the second poster is slightly lacking. It looks more like a collage and could've been better edited, truthfully. Nonetheless, your background is a nice addition that portrays the theme well.

Description and Foreword: 8/10

Your description is simple yet poetic, also introducing the characters in the process. It's even better that you pulled some excerpts from the story itself. Although, I found some grammar mistakes:

1) ...he was the one who needs saving...
Edited: ...he was the one who needed saving...
2) The entire first sentence "And these..." sounds like a run-on. I believe you can tweak it a little, maybe split it into two sentences. 
3) ...but he just knew this man, struggling