"Mr. Perfect"

Author: Fan_of_Karma

Main Characters: Myungsoo, Sungyeol, Sungjong, Hoya

Genre: Romcom, School Life, 

Status: On-going

Description of Story:
When Myungsoo changes high school, his life is completely turned upside down by the ego-istic super-idol Sungjong and his incredibly childish cousin Sungyeol. Myungsoo's sister definitely isn't making things easier, and neither is his celebrity crush Hoya.

Story Title: 4/5

When choosing the story title you must do reserach if title was already used or is it catchy and not cliche. Why? Because it happens that readers find title boring and they wouldn't be bothered to read the story. Title is good its a bit overused, but somehow it's relevant to your story. 

Graphics: 7/10

Graphics are too simple for my taste I expected something very catchy for eye. I suggest you to change it in order to make readers want to click on your story. I am sorry if I sounded too harsh about this. 

Description and Foreword: 8/10

Description was good written except one part. 
Ex. "To many girls, Kim Myungsoo is Mr.Perfect." Revised version: "For many girls, Kim Myungsoo is Mr.Perfect."
Foreword is okay until the part where you added section about the story you dont need it because you have put description. Character chart is okay I guess I dont like it but you didnt written much about them which is good.

Characterization: 9/10

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