[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for teenme14[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Reminiscence[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Reminiscence

Author: teenme14

Main Characters: Kim Jongdae and OC (Kim Hye Sun)

Genre: Angst, Romance

Status: Completed

Description of Story: It took him a minute to like her and only a day to love her. But it will take a lifetime for him to forget about her. Finally, after visiting 10 different jewelry stores and going through a crowd of his fans, Jongdae had bought the perfect gift for Hye Sun. He held the small black square case in his hands and smiled to himself in satisfaction. He couldn’t stop thinking of what he was going to do on her birthday after he will go back tomorrow. What was he going to do on Hye Sun’s birthday? Propose.

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5
Personally, I like your title. One of the best ways to attracts readers is through a catchy title and I think you achieved that.

Graphics: 7/10
The poster is fine and simple but it really didn't give off that much angst feeling. You might also think about putting a background for your story. A lot of readers won't even bother giving your story a try if the design is not that attractive enough.