[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for fasiha1234[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Best Friend[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Best Friend

Author: fasiha1234

Main Characters: Hayoung (OC), Kai and Kris

Genre: Romance & Schoollife

Status: On-going

Description of Story: What happens when you fall in love with your best friend? What happens when your best friend starts dating your cousin? Hurts. Yes. It hurts. That's what happened to 17 years old Ha Young. She fell in love with her best friend Kai - The most popular guy in school. And when she finally had the courage to confess her love for him, the disaster happens. Kai announces that he is dating Ha Young's cousin Krystal - The most popular girl in school. That's when she realized that 'Love' doesn't always mean hearts and butterflies. And that's when she gave up on the word called 'LOVE'. But what happens when her childhood crush returns from China? Will Hayoung learn to love again? Will Kai finally realize his true feelings?

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 3/5

The title is not that unique since a lot of AFF stories has that title as well but the story/ the plot itself paid it off.

 

Graphics: 10/10

 

I like your poster, especially the quote below the title, "Love is not my style after all." Haha. It kind of reminded me of Kris as well since his in-word in EXO's Showtime is "Chicken is not my style." Did you do it on purpose or..... Hahaha! Anyway, your poster suits the theme of the story and the background matched the poster well. All in all, good job! *thumbs up* (I LOVE YOUR TRAILER TOO SO... I'LL BE GIVING YOU A +2 POINTS! *winks winks*)  

Description and Foreword: 9/10

I like your description. It was a bit short but it made the story more interesting. I would like to make some adjustments though (but it's still your decision if you want to change it or not):

~ What happens when you fall in love with your best friend? What happens when your best friend starts dating your cousin? Does it hurt? Yes, it does. That's what happened to the 17 years old girl, Ha Young. She fell in love with her best friend, Kai - the most popular guy in school. When she finally had the courage to confess her love for him, the disaster happens. Kai announces that he is dating Ha Young's cousin Krystal - the most popular girl in s