☑ HaibaraShery

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Calling for HaibaraShery

"1:28"

Author: HaibaraShery

Main Characters: Kris / OC (JC)

Genre: Angst, Fluff

Status: Completed

Description of Story:
“Stay with me and don’t ever go away from me.”
“…..I did this because I love you.”
“Wait for me.”
“I’ll be waiting.”
“I’m afraid you’ll get lost.”
“I won’t.”
“I love you forever.”
“You’ll be fine,”
“Thank you, for the sweet payment I got,”
“You’ve given me forever within the numbered days….”
“Don’t you dare to hurt me again!”
“…..I’m looking at the star from afar, just like usual.”
Kris never knew where his life would lead him to but he had someone to show him a way to happiness although he had to pay for that. She built him a way towards his dream but then she had to leave him just so she could comeback to him again as she promised to on that cold day in winter.
“A drop in the ocean, a chance in the weather. I was praying that you and me might end up together. It’s like wishing for rain as I stand in the desert but I’m holding you closer than most. Cause you are my Heaven." -Javier Colon
While Kris was running to chase his dream, she was actually walking in his shadow along with him.
Separated in winter and met again in winter.
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  Critique:

Story Title: 4/5

It is a unique tittle, thought I would have chosen one differently because it’s strange to the eye- to find a fictional story written with a tittle like this. However, it may be what catches people’s attention. 

 

Graphics: 7/10

The poster and background are really pretty, however I believe that where the chapter is actually written (the background and format of the text) is rather awkward. Honestly I could

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