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Story Title: Silver Aura
Author: Trixchia
Main Characters: All of Vixx and an OC
Genre: Fantasy/Supernatural, Romance
Status: On-going
Description of Story: Princess Beatrice is being punished. She is exposed to the male-dominated world. How will she cope?
CRITIQUE:
Story Title: 4/5
The title is very unique, and very interesting. When I read it, I thought of it being something related to the soul. It is slightly simple, but I like it like this.
Graphics: 7/10
The posters are fantastic and they go with the uniqueness of the story. The girl in the poster perfectly portrays the beauty of the character. The problem is that there is no background. To me the background is as important as the title. You need to have something to show what the story portrays, or something that can show of more of its uniqueness.
Description and Foreword: 3/10
It's just one line, that doesn't really explain much about this story. There are no explanations of the characters, or anything relating to them. You need to add details, explanations, or at least a good quote from the story. Add something like:
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