[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for tartytorts[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Seven Sins of Love[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Seven Sins of Love

Author: tartytorts

Main Characters: Yonghwa, Seohyun and more side characters.

Genre: Friendship, Romance, Schoollife

Status: On-going

Description of Story: Their love was not easy. How could they be even attracted to each other? He was like brocolli inside a juicy ham burger, while she was a piece of oily bacon in his green salad. How? So when Yin meets Yong, will pigs fly ? or sparks dance? Will they forge a bond that will be their own epic love story? 

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5

Your title sounds very interesting and unique. It doesn't sound clique nor common so I have nothing bad to say about that.

 

Graphics: 0/0

You don't have any background nor graphic so this section will be excluded from the grading, however, I advise you to get some as it does catch the reader's attention. Here are some suggestions to great poster shops:
❥❥ Poster Paradise Request Shop ∞ | Batch 24 closed 
✧ℂhing a ℒing ✧ Graphic Shop -o p e n-
Jubilant ∞ Graphics | O p e n (request for autumnjoy she's really good)

 

Description and Foreword: 2.5/10

I like how you explained the story, however, the font colour was not pleasant to look at. When writing decription and foreword put equal amount of effort you put into the summary to font colour/appearance. Also, Your character description, no offense, but was very disgusting to look at. Because of your f