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[CONTENTID2]Angel's Smile[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Angel's Smile

Author: iblackstar12

Main Characters: Kim Cheonmi, Kim Joonmyeon / Suho

Genre: Angst, Family

Status: Completed

Description of Story: In life, there are many things that we regret. We should've done this or that...but we didn't. There are things that we take for granted because they're already part of our daily lives. They're just there. We only notice them... when they're gone. Just like what the song said, "Only know you love her when you let her go..." - Passenger. Sometimes when we let go of someone or that someone left us... that's the only time that we realize how precious they are for us...

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 4/5

Your title is not original nor unique but it fitted in very well with your story, at first from your title I thought it was going to be a cliche fluffy romance story but I was wrong. I matched in well with the member you chose from EXO and I think this is perfect because when you see your mother or father smile it's like an angels smile and happiness is in you. Sorry if that was cheesy XD 

 

Graphics: 9/10

Honestly, I felt like it was a little too dark, so if you want me to do a re-do, I would be happy to ^^ I didn't really think that it would be this sad that I would start crying so I did make the poster alittle fluffy with a hint of darkness -_- I'm really stupid XD 

I like how you matched the background with the poster colours and how it was kinda like a sun set, which related to the story very well ^^ I'm personally not a fan of people putting backgrounds as they don't match the poster sometimes but your one I really loved ^^ 

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