[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for HaibaraShery[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Stardust, Book One: The Seekers[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Stardust, Book One: The Seekers

Author: HaibaraShery and yourpopcorngirl

Main Characters: OC, Luhan, Kai, Sehun

Genre: Angst, Fantasy/Supernatural, Romance

Status: On-going

Description of Story: Two different immortal being were fighting for one precious thing. Pure Love. But it was forbidden for them as love would kill them. Then who would win the battle?

From LoveInColors: I asked yeolwho05 to change the Description you sent us and put the original one from your story because you gave us a big spoiler. I don’t want people who read this review to find out, especially if they want to read your story. 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5

I like the title. When you say “The Seekers” I think you they seek for love, right? Correct me if I’m wrong, but that’s what I understand. If that’s so, then it goes with the story and I personally would find myself clicking on it to read more. 

Graphics: 7/10

The poster its okay, but you can do better! Add a darker background to go with it.

Description and Foreword: 8/10

Interesting description, you kept it nice and simple and summed up everything. However, there are a few mistakes in the boys’ quotes. “Do you know how hurtful it is?” / “Do you know how it feels when you need someone you love but being together is dangerous?” – Just some of the mistakes caught my eyes. 
You said the story it’s an entry for a contest, but what I don’t understand its how the prompt you used has anything to do with