[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for Dokmishin[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]The Promise[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: The Promise

Author: Dokmishin

Main Characters: Park Shinhye, Jung Yonghwa

Genre: Drama, Romance

Status: Completed

Description of Story: Park Shinhye, a melancholic girl who wants to break free from the world she has been living since she is young. Jung Yonghwa, hot headed guy who is tired of his life, he has been good for nothing person all his life. Loves comes in and stops the time that barely breath. 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 3/5

It links in with the story well but it isn't exactly unique/special. I've read many fanfics with the same story title and sometimes if you've seen it many times you tend to skim over it.

Graphics: 10/10

I personally like these types of posters as they're not too bright and they don't stick out like a sore thumb. ^^

Description and Foreword: 8.5/10

It's good but it gives off the image that the main character is dying from a disease or a sudden illness ; which is common in stories like this with have all the cliche scenes. Even so it's good as it gives you a sneak peak in what's happening and I did like it. There are some grammer errors such as....
Orginal: "Yonghwa was shocked with that he heard."
My edit: "Yonghwa was shocked with what he had heard."
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