☑ IAmAnExoFan
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[CONTENTID2]Not Again...[/CONTENTID2]
[CONTENTID3]Story Title: Not Again...
Author: IAmAnExoFan
Main Characters: Kim Jong In & DO Kyung Soo
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Romance, School Life
Status: Ongoing
Description of Story: DO Kyung Soo leaves Korea to escape his childhood best friend, Kim Jong In. He was in love with the guy but out of fear of rejection, Kyungsoo runs away. When he comes back to Korea, he's surprised to see his childlike and innocent bestfriend turn into the bad boy of the school. Kyungsoo avoids him as best as he could, afraid to awaken the feelings inside him that lied dormant for so long. Can Jongin prove to Kyungsoo that he was still the same friend that Kyungsoo had years ago?
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Story Title: 3/5
Your title is good but I don't really grasp the genre there. One of the best ways to attract readers is through a catchy title. For me though, your title seems too common.
Graphics: 0/0
I will not be grading yy for this but having a poster and a background is important in a story. A lot of people won't even bother giving your story a try if they don't see a poster. That's a very sad reality. So I suggest you get a poster and a back
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