[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for PictureMeBroken[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Coffee Beans and One-night Stands[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Coffee Beans and One-night Stands

Author: PictureMeBroken and Aya-Chi

Main Characters: Kris and Chanyeol along with a few EXO members

Genre: Drama, Romance,

Status: On-going

Description of Story: Because Chanyeol is one "Hella Gay" barista and Tao is his way too nosey boss who just wants to get him a hot Chinese-Canadian boyfriend

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5

Your title is very unique ^^ I like how it linked very well story using words that associated with barista and about the one night stand - What Chanyeol called it when He and Kris done it XD So everything relates to your story very well, which alot of people don't do as they try to make it unique but half of the time it never relates to it, so kudos to you ^^

Graphics: 6/10

I think it was alittle bit crowded in my opinion. The colors matched and complimented each other well but I felt there was just a little bit too much going on. But still it was really good since you put the two main characters and coffee and a shop in the background which fitted your story really well. There is no background which for me is honestly fine so I rarely care about the backgrounds XD

Description and Foreword: 10/10

I enjoyed it alot XD It really got me interested (not saying it because I was told to reveiw it XD) I liked how you didn't just put a dialog but gave a short summary on what's happening; explaining the phone number to why the 'mysterious' person said " you, Huang Zitao" I liked how in the foreword you put what inspired you to write this story and I found it hilarious XD

Characterization: 9.5/10

I saw that you wanted me to focus this review on the plot and characterization so I will be doing that ^^ You described each character really well, I could tell that Kris was the type that played everything cool and hide his feelings abit i.e how he felt when Tao got a new boyfriend, Chanyeol...was I guess kicked out from his house since you wrote that if he was fired then he would be homeless; my conclusion his parents didn't want a freeloader in the house XD