[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for --obsidian[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Learning to Dance[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Learning to Dance

Author: --obsidian

Main Characters: Cho Kyuhyun, Lee Sungmin

Genre: Drama, Fantasy/Supernatural, Romance, ,

Status: On-going

Description of Story: Side story to chocolatemilk90's two EunHae stories. Sungmin has been revealed to have a japanese faerie as his alter ego and there are some terrifying but exciting times ahead.

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 4/5

I personally don't think the title is the best for this story. It can be misunderstood mainly because at first glance, the first thing that popped into my mind was either a video showing you how to dance to a particular dance group or types of dancing you could learn, maybe about a girl who wanted to dance but couldn't. I also didn't think it fitted in with the story but since i's ongoing maybe you could clear it up for me ^^

Graphics: 8.5/10

I liked it but it was hard to read 'Learning To Dance' but none the less it was good. I saw that you wrote the story was a side story on Learn