NOTE: Three chapters, continuing.

(8/10) Title: Well, I know you haven't gotten very far yet into the story, so I have to say that I'm not sure if the title has related to the story just yet, but I like it.

(8/10) Character:Ae was a little more hot tempered than I had expected, although I kind of understand her point of view. She seems to have developed a type of situation with her mother, and I hope to see a good change in the story. Myung is a very good friend figure. He seems to be the one who brightens up the story, along with the other guys. The mother and her half-blood brother play well in the story with their roles. And Woo Hyun's role as CEO makes him seem narrow minded and spoiled, I guess it shows some of his seriousness.

(9/10) Originality:I thought Woo did show his "high and mighty side". I was thinking he'd also be very serious. Ae was a little different from what I expected, although I like the change, seeing it from her perspective. Myung plays the wonderful supportive friend, and I like that about him.

(39/40) Storyline/Plot:It was a very nice plot, I liked how it started out introducing the family issues, and then her buddies.

(15/25) Grammar/Errors:I realized you have a problem with past and present tense grammars, it's very common, so I advise you reread and stick to one tense. You would also miss a few words that should've been in the sentences once in a while. It seems your largest weakness is grammar, so just take your time to reread. You can also make some of your  sentences simpler, like on chp. 3, you could've put, "will shoot at those who dare make eye contact" ( with that someone)  instead.  You should only use the word, "don't" for "I, we, they", and "doesn't" for "he/she". Some words are also plural when they shouldn't be.

(4/5) Overall Enjoyment:I liked it, although I know I can't say very much because only a little's happened. My favorite part must've been where Myung defends her when they were younger, it shows his personality well. 

(83/100) Points Total

Bonus: Honestly, I didn't want to handle the cussing, I didn't think there'd be any at first too, but I was still happy to review.

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