NOTE: Includes 3 chapters.

(10/10) Title: I really like the title. I hope this is right, but I think it's 'spose to mean "transparent" like Baekhyun's ghost, and then a whole "new world", like the photo. I really find the title interesting, and I like how it matches. It's like a nice mix of the stories meaning.

(9/10) Character: The 3 characters are all kind people, I like that. I think she could get a friend, though. I like their relationships. Baek and Chanyeol seem to be the good friends like I thought, they seem so alike. They're all cute together. I get her as the shy girl.

(9/10) Originality: It seems real to how they were described in the prologue. It has a reality in their personalities. I didn't expect them to be so calm although I did expect her to faint or something. I thought they'd all freak out! But I liked how they were so calm it put a nice vibe to it. 

(39/40) Storyline/Plot: I really like the beginning and their story of her pic. that brought her to be more attached together. The beginning plot is like smooth and flows nice. But I know you'll write more, and it'll get even better!! I do wonder if just anyone can see him or not. Like maybe if you add more info on the fact she can see him. I think putting some more little comedy in it will be a fun idea.

(22/25) Grammar/Errors: There were a couple grammar errors. Words with missing letters. Although sometimes I couldn't tell who was talking, so it'd be easy to read if you added who was talking more.

(5/5) Overall Enjoyment: It was nice going and I'm already looking forward to the journey.

(94/100) Points Total

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