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(10/10) Title: A simple title but still it is something special and unique. As a reader I have to say that I didn't really knew what will happen because of the two ways to interpret your title. As I already wrote in a previous review of this story I love that you can take the baby in the title as both a pet name from Yuri for Yoona or as the baby they will have in the future.

(10/10) Character: I really like your characters. In your story every character has a meaning, is important. Yuri is such a nice and caring person but because of her work she has a hard time because she can't be with Yoona as much as she wants to. But she is willing to let everything behind her if something happens to Yoona. And she always tries to be strong so Yoona doesn't have to worry about her but when she is talking to Siwon you realize even more how much she loves Yoona because of her worries but she is also a good mother because she wants to know as much as possible so she won't do something wrong the baby.
 Yoona is a lovely woman who loves Yuri just like the other loves her. She is always worried that the other is alright and is heartbreaking when they parted because of Jiyeon and then they meet again in the hospital. Personally one of my favorite scenes in the story because it show that no matter what happens they still love each other and nobody will break them apart.
About Jiyeon, I won't write that much about her because that would end with some bad words on one side because of what she did to Yoona and Yuri just to gain her own happiness but also some pity because she must be really lonely and she definitely needs someone who tells her that she is loved by someone so she won't act like this again. At least she did the right thing in the end.
Then there are also the other members of SNSD who are funny, weird but most of all the most amazing friend I ever saw in my life. They are always there for each other and help each other. They are so lively and funny that without them the story would probably be more serious.

(8/10) Originality: I never really read a story with two girls being in love and having a baby but I think that all in all there are some stories that have a similar plot. So the plot may be not unique but the way your story develops makes the story unique, makes it your story.

(40/40) Storyline/Plot: The plot of the story is pretty interesting because we get to know Yuri and Yoona together. You start with the proposal and the news that Yoona is pregnant and from that point on we are with them together and get to know how their life as married couple is. In the beginning they seem to be happy but after reading the first chapters the reader realizes that yes, they are happy but there are still some problems they have to deal with. Not only with Yuri who seems to be sick but also later when Jiyeon appears and it seems like they will break apart. This story is really good written which makes the plot even better so I couldn't stop reading it.

(24/25) Grammar/Errors: There are no huge grammatical errors that catch the eye while reading. So there is nothing to say here. 

(5/5) Overall Enjoyment: Overall I really enjoyed reading this story, there are some parts of the story that I had to read twice because I loved them so much. *-* Ähm, so I really liked this story and I hope this review is helpful. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.

(92/100) Points Total

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I actually answered everything already above but again if you have a question just write me a message. You know me^^
But what I didn't said and probably should is that you have a good writing style which is nice and interesting to read.

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