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(4/10) Title: The title didn't catch my attention and is really simple although it somehow fits the story. I prefer you to not write the title in all capital letters and to choose a more interesting title, it will catch the reader's eyes if the title was attracting.

(5/10) Character: I kinda dislike Allison's personalities in this story, she is strong, but she almost spend most on time on self-pity, since the beginning, you keep writing that Allison is self-pity, that her parents didn't care about her, how she annoyed by marriage and she seems impatient. And Kyungsoo should act more responsible to Soobin and the wedding, or at least try to get to know Allison. Lay is really a nice friends for both of them. Maybe, you should write Allison is nice, friendly or even hyperactive girl. Even though she is impatient, she should act nice towards Mrs. Do while picking the wedding card (she looks like a spoiled brat). Allison's personalities are really diffrent from other's girl characters from arranged marriage fanfics. A lot readers prefer the girl character is nice, kind and heart-warming person. But you managed to express all the characters's emotions, I praised you for this.

(5/10) Originality: This idea of arranged marriage is anything but original. You can see this kind of stories everywhere, this story is really normal to see.

(23/40) Storyline/Plot: From the beginning, the story went good, you describe all the things nicely, the place, people and the emotions. But the story didn't excited enough, a lot of things haven't happen yet, you have write until Chapter 11, but the relationship between Kyungsoo and Allison didn't improved, they don't even talk to each other yet. Maybe you should try to write a longer chapter and start writing a more interesting plot. Example: Soobin finally know what happen to Kyungsoo and meets with Allison, how Kyungsoo and Allison gets to know each other, how Allison slowly discover that Lay has feeling for her or how Allison becomes friends with EXO.

(25/25) Grammar/Errors: You use the grammars really well. The past tense and present tense, I didn't find a single grammar mistake in all the chapters! That is really amazing, keep this good work up.

(3/5) Overall Enjoyment: I really enjoy the story, I keep craving for more though the storyline hasn't developed yet.Their marriage's life, their relatioships, the problems, etc. I am sorry if I offense you, and good luck on your stories^^.

(65/100) Points Total

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