Story: Blindfolded

Requestor's Username: Minderaser

Reviewer's AFF Name: KaihleeLo

Date Received - Date Completed: 15 August 2014 - 15 August 2014

NOTE: This story is Rated M - Prologue

(8/10) Title: "Blindfolded" is a good title, since this story is just starting I can't say whether the title will later ties into the storyline and plot or not. Love the cover by the way~!

(9/10) Character: Since it's just the prologue, I believe the main characters are mainly exposed and revealed. Character development and whatnot, I'm sure those will bloom smoothly later on. Here we have another bad boy Jaejoong, and you really show that well so kudos! Lihua gives off a depressing aura, maybe it's just me, but she cares a lot about her memories with her deceased brother and it really shows when she ask Jaehoon to move in with her instead. I really want to know the relationship between Jaehoon, Chanyeol, and Jaejoong (haha) so hopefully that will soon be revealed as well.

(10/10) Originality: Oh my gosh, the feels and originality was beyond real and impressive. I could picture every scene just fine with your concise description and include my own touches to them. Great job!

(39/40) Storyline/Plot: The storyline/plot is smoothly developing through the prologue. The description is catchy! I love how you start it out two weeks after the death of Junho and she was ready to move in with her new legal guardian(s). Then the story progresses to a five years past and Jaejoong and Chanyeol finally shows up as our other lead characters. However, I would love to see more thoughts of Lihua. I would also love to see more backgrounds of Jaehoon and Lihua.

(23/25) Grammar/Errors: There were barely any grammatical errors and it was very straight to the point and concise. However, there were minor errors where beginning and ending quotes were left out and just a word or two that were missing a letter.

(5/5) Overall Enjoyment: I loved it, honestly. I'm a huge fan of mystery and tragedy. I love tragedy stories! Consider myself a sadist at that, joking. But I enjoyed it and I susbcribed and upvoted again because I want you to keep writing and I'll keep reading~ Good luck!

(94/100) Points Total

Bonus: Your questions and focuses for us:

plot, characterization, flow and writing style

Plot hasn't been developed in my opinion. Flow and writing style were amazing and very well done!

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