NOTE: 10 chapters

(10/10) Title: Wow, I like you revealing the end and tying it to the title. It''s a wonderful and meaningful title.

(9/10) Character:I think Aerin was good at sticking to her description. She developed very well, It was nice to see lots of changes. Inguk seemed to have lots of emotions flowing through him. His personality changed a lot throughout the story. All of the other characters were very well and stuck to their roles. I loved each of their different personalities.  

(9/10) Originality: The originality of each person was well done and fit. I am glad you shared that you knew you didn't add enough info. on Inguk 's fam. Because I wasn't real sure about his former family. It was good and I liked the originality 's developement.

(40/40) Storyline/Plot:The plot was great. Although for some reason I expected there'd be a big explanation for the studio burning. The kids were cute. Although I didn't expect Inguk and Jae to be a couple in the end, although they are a cute couple. I was freaking out about who Aerin would end up with, and I wondered if Inguk liked her. Although he also seemed like the coolest guy friend. I really wanted Min to be with her again. And goodness she did too. I thought that when Jae showed up close to the end, that she was going to be Aerin first female friend or something. And she was like the cool girl that had to be fit in with the couples. The storyline and past were nicely planned out, and I did think Min was suspicious when they broke up. 

(23/25) Grammar/Errors:Ha Ha, you taught me how to spell cologne. There were a lot of good vocab that I had to search up, that's a very good sign. Although there were few errors here and there, and some accidental word misplaces. It was all very well. You're my best viewer at grammar so far.

(4/5) Overall Enjoyment: The ending must've been my favorite. I liked how the relationships were built and made.

(95/100) Total Points

 Bonus: It was nice to read your story, although there were more bad words than I thought. I'm glad the wasn't big.Jk thx. 

Nothing in particular. I really just want a review on the things that you liked and what you think I could improve on:

**Well, the only thing that I can think of is that I kind of skim over Inguk's back story. That's mainly because the contest I write the story for didn't extend the deadline until after I wrote up to chapter six or seven. So, I didn't get to go as into depth with Inguk as I originally wanted to.**

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