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Author: Queensabelle
Reviewed By: Eunriehyun

Requested Date: 10/01/15
Story Link: Link
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Bonus: Grammar Mistakes:There were a couple of mistakes here and there,but it can be fixed by using  Microsoft Word or an edition writing app.

Style of writing: It was a story full of emotions and I could easily see the relationship that was establish between the characters, it did attract attention.

Story plot: It was done beautifully, I like it. 

Title: 10/10

Logical: 3/3

He heard it... was a logical hint of the story's wereabouts. It was chosen carefully and used well. 
Eye-catching: 3/3
Your title was so intriguing that I continue to have many questions even before reading anything. That's good.
Eye-catching: 4/4
Again, it started good with only having that title,you did well. 

Description/Foreword: 10/10

Summary: 5/5

The foreword was short,sweet and to the point.  Besides you presented the reader with a piece of information in knowing more the protagonists. 
Appearance: 5/5
Like that it was well organized, and the colours were according to the type of writing. 

Character Development/Showcasing: 10/10

Development: 5/5

So, she was not self-confidence and that brought her down many times,but her friends were there for her it was only a matter of time when she could be there for herself. 
Relation/Cast: 5/5
Again, the friends help her alot so in away the relationship between her and the others were based by trust and knowing each other inside out.

Behind the Author's Mind: 37/40

Logical: 10/10

Good,made sense. 
Original: 10/10
It was original and it was also refreshing. 
Tone: 5/5
It was also good, it was so good that I could almost perseve on what the characters were going to say next.

Naration: 2/5

You must work here. While you told the reader what it was happening you weren't telling the important details which would've brought a bigger impact other than "its cute" phrases.  
Storyline: 10/10
It was done beautifully and put throught. You wanted to tell what we in a certain way feel at times, how we can feel insecure and not good enough but we can always count on those around us,those who truly appreciate and love us. It was good. 

Proper Use of the English Language: 19/25

Proper Grammar/Punctuation: 05/10

You must work on this peticular part as well, use a dictionary or an app that can help you on those errors.
Termonology: 5/5
It was understandable and easy to follow up.  
Language Barrier: 09/10
There was not much of a language barrier. 

General Enjoyment/Last Comment: 5/5
I enjoy it and I would've love to see a bit of a dramatic twist,I'm not saying it wasn't good because it was. And it made me feel as in a connection with her as we almost never see our own values until someone else tells us. IT was a story readers must read,if you work on the parts I just told you;you'll have more readers and feel self satisfied. 

Total: 91/100