Six Deadly Sins - bapbangme
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REQUEST ON: 5/7/16
REVIEWER: BLACKROSESTEARS
FINISHED ON: 5/11/16
SCORE: 100/100
TITLE: (10/10)
LOGICAL (3/3) - I CAN TOTALLY UNDERSTAND WHY YOU CHOSE THIS TITLE AND IT FITS THE STORY AND ITS PLOT REALLY WELL.
EYE-CATCHING (3/3) - THE TITLE CAUGHT MY INTEREST RIGHT AWAY, IT SOUNDS REALLY INTERESTING AND IT SOUNDS LIKE A PRETTY DARK STORY WHICH IS SOMETHING I REALLY LIKE. THE TITLE IS REALLY GOOD BECAUSE IT GIVES YOU SPACE TO THINK ABOUT POSSIBILITIES OF WHAT WILL HAPPEN IN THE STORY WHICH IS ANOTHER THING I REALLY LIKE.
ORIGINAL (4/4) - THERE ARE NO OTHER STORIES WITH A SIMILAR OR THE SAME TITLE WHICH GIVES THE STORY A FRESH VIBE AND JUST MAKES IT EVEN BETTER.
STORY'S FOREWORD/DESCRIPTION (10/10)
STORY'S SUMMARY (5/5) - IT IS A PRETTY NICE SUMMARY OF THE PLOT WHICH ALREADY SHOWS THAT THE PLOT ITSELF IS UNIQUE. IT SOUNDS REALLY INTERESTING AND DOESN'T REVEAL TOO MUCH OF THE ACTUAL PLOT AND INSTEAD RAISES THE CURIOSITY OF THE READER.
APPEARANCE (5/5) - THE STRUCTURE IS ALSO REALLY GOOD, EVERYTHING IS EASY TO READ AND TO UNDERSTAND. IT DOESN'T LOOK MESSY AT ALL.
CHARACTERS/CASTS (10/10)
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT (5/5) - SO FAR IT IS HARD TO SAY MUCH ABOUT THE DEVELOPMENT OF YOUR CHARACTERS BUT SO FAR THEY ARE WELL PORTRAIT. I REALLY LIKE HOW THEY ALL HAVE THIS EVIL VIBE ON THEM AND NOT SUDDENLY ARE NICE AND WANT TO HELP HUMANS BECAUSE THEY LIKE THEM BUT JUST TO GAIN THEIR OWN PROFIT FROM IT, IT.
CHARACTER'S RELATIONS (5/5) - THEIR RELATIONSHIP ARE MOSTLY NOT REVEALED SO FAR BUT THOSE WHO ARE REVEAL ARE REALLY INTERESTING AND INTENSE. FOR EXAMPLE BAEKHYUN AND KRIS ARE KIND OF FLIRTING WITH EACH OTHER BUT STILL DON'T GO FURTHER, YOU CAN FEEL THE TENSION BETWEEN THEM.
THE AUTHOR'S MINDSET (40/40)
LOGICALLY (10/10) - SO FAR EVERYTHING MADE SENSE AND THERE WERE NO TIMES IT GOT CONFUSION.
ORIGINALITY (10/10) - WHEN I READ THE FOREWORD, I ALREADY THOUGHT THAT IT WOULD BE AN ORIGINAL PLOT AND NOW THAT I STARTED READING THE STORY, I AM PRETTY CONVINCED.
TONE (5/5) - AS I ALREADY MENTIONED ABOVE, YOU WERE ALWAYS ABLE TO CAPTURE THE MOOD OF YOUR SCENES AND THE TENSION WHENEVER THERE WAS SOME. IT ALWAYS FITTED PRETTY GOOD THE SCENES.
NARRATION (5/5) -THE POVS ARE WELL USED, YOU DON'T CHANGE THEM OUT OF NOWHERE AND STICK TO THEM ONCE YOU BEGAN WITH ONE. LIKE THAT WE ARE ABLE TO SEE NOT ONLY WHAT THE DEMONS ARE THINKING BUT ALSO THE HUMANS WHICH IS PRETTY INTERESTING AND WILL BE EVEN MORE INTERESTING IN THE FUTURE CHAPTERS.
STORYLINE (10/10) - THE BEGINNING IS REALLY GOOD WITH BAEKHYUN BEING BORED SO HE MADE THE PROPOSAL TO GO TO EARTH AND PLAY. THE OTHERS ARE NOT REALLY INTERESTED IN IT AND DON'T GO WITH HIM OR AT LEAST IT LOOKS LIKE THAT. BECAUSE WHEN BAEKHYUN WANTS TO HELP CHANYEOL, HE MEETS KRIS AGAIN. I REALLY LIKED THAT PART BECAUSE IT WAS FUNNY IN A WAY BECAUSE OF HOW THEY ACTED EARLIER IN THE STORY BUT STILL WENT TO EARTH.
SO FAR THE STORY IS REALLY GOOD. IT IS NICE TO READ, YOUR WRITING STYLE IS ADDICTING AND THE PLOT IS REALLY INTERESTING. I REALLY LIKE HOW THE PAIRINGS ALL HAVE A DIFFERENT STORY THAT FITS THE DEMONS AND THEIR SPECIALIST FIELD. THE FLOW IS ALSO REALLY GOOD, SO FAR NOT TOO FAST.
SO FAR THE STORY IS REALLY GOOD. IT IS NICE TO READ, YOUR WRITING STYLE IS ADDICTING AND THE PLOT IS REALLY INTERESTING. I REALLY LIKE HOW THE PAIRINGS ALL HAVE A DIFFERENT STORY THAT FITS THE DEMONS AND THEIR SPECIALIST FIELD. THE FLOW IS ALSO REALLY GOOD, SO FAR NOT TOO FAST.
PROPER USE OF THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE (25/25)
PROPER GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION (10/10) - YOUR GRAMMAR IS REALLY GOOD, I DIDN'T FIND ANY DISTURBING MISTAKES WHILE READING SO GOOD JOB.
TERMINOLOGY (5/5) - THERE WERE NO WORDS OR PHRASES THAT WERE OVERUSED SO THERE IS NOTHING TO WRITE HERE TOO.
LANGUAGE BARRIER (10/10) - THERE WAS ALSO OVERUSE OF THE KOREAN OR ANY OTHER LANGUAGE.
REVIEWER'S ENJOYMENT (5/5)
OVERALL I REALLY ENJOYED READING YOUR STORY BECAUSE I LIKE YOUR WRITING STYLE AND THESE TYPE OF PLOTS TOO SO I THINK I WILL CONTINUE TO READ YOUR STORY.
I HOPE THIS REVIEW IS STILL HELPFUL IN A WAY.
I HOPE THIS REVIEW IS STILL HELPFUL IN A WAY.
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