Story: Alone (M)

Requestor's Username: hugebarbieass

Reviewer's AFF Name: KaihleeLo

Date Received - Date Completed: 8 August 2014 -  8 August 2014

NOTE: This story is Rated M - One chapter

(7/10) Title: I personally think the title "Alone" is overrated. I believe you can come up with a more catchy and unique title!

(8/10) Character: Since it's just the first chapter/introduction, I can tell IU is very feisty and stubborn and it's not like every day we see that kind of IU so I love her so far! Also she seems to be very comfortable so that's a plus. What I mean is, when she mention the orphanage getting a new child, despite the cause, it wasn't news to her. Sehun seems like a very nice guy. Then again it's chapter 1 so I cannot give you much insight on that.

(10/10) Originality: The story's feelings are very detailed and I can totally see that. Kudos!

(35/40) Storyline/Plot: The storyline/plot hasn't been developed yet but so far I'm loving the two's relationship! Just by the summary, it's a book I would read, honestly. I like the idea of the storyline and the orphanage. I can't remember the last time reading or watching a story where one of the leads isn't from a rich family or a poor but the orphanage.

(25/25) Grammar/Errors: I did not find anything wrong with the words usage and grammars so A+!

(5/5) Overall Enjoyment: Did I not mention I love it? Well I did and I do! Promise you'll continue writing it, because I can't wait to see where it leads to!

(90/100) Points Total

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