The Seal of Light - -Tigress-
BLK's Review Shop ACHIEVE--BLK'S--
--REVIEWS-
--REVIEWS-
REMINDER
////////////
BONUS: I TRIED TO ANSWER ALL
THE QUESTIONS IN THE REVIEW
BUT IF THERE IS STILL SOMETHING UNCLEAR, FEEL FREE TO PM
ALSO I AM REALLY SORRY THAT IT TOOK ME SO LONG TO FINISH YOUR REVIEW!
THE QUESTIONS IN THE REVIEW
BUT IF THERE IS STILL SOMETHING UNCLEAR, FEEL FREE TO PM
ALSO I AM REALLY SORRY THAT IT TOOK ME SO LONG TO FINISH YOUR REVIEW!
♦FEEL FREE TO MESSAGE US PERSONALLY WITH ANY CONCERNS.
♦ THANK YOU FOR CHOOSING BLK
REVIEWS AND FOR YOUR PATIENCE! HOPE TO SEE YOU VISIT AGAIN.
-TIGRESS-
REQUEST ON: 12/29/15
REVIEWER: BLACKROSESTEARS
FINISHED ON: 4/03/15
SCORE: 99/100
TITLE: (10/10)
LOGICAL (3/3) - THE TITLE MADE SENSE FROM THE BEGINNING OF THE STORY UNTIL ITS END AND IT WAS EASY TO SEE WHY YOU CHOOSE IT.
EYE-CATCHING (3/3) - STILL THE TITLE IS EYE-CATCHING AND SOUNDS REALLY INTERESTING AND I THINK ESPECIALLY FANS OF FANTASY WILL LOVE TO READ IT JUST AFTER READING THE TITLE.
ORIGINAL (4/4) - ALSO THE TITLE IS PRETTY ORIGINAL, THERE ARE NO OTHER STORIES WITH THE SAME OR A SIMILAR TITLE WHICH MAKES IT JUST EVEN BETTER WHEN YOU READ IT.
STORY'S FOREWORD/DESCRIPTION (10/10)
STORY'S SUMMARY (5/5) - I REALLY LIKED READING YOUR FOREWORD BECAUSE IT MADE ME CURIOUS ABOUT THE ACTUAL STORY WITHOUT REVEALING TOO MUCH. IT IS WELL WRITTEN AND SHORT. ALSO YOU WERE ABLE TO SHOW WITHOUT MANY WORDS THAT IT SOUNDS LIKE A VERY ORIGINAL PLOT.
APPEARANCE (5/5) - THE OVERALL APPEARANCE IS REALLY GOOD TOO, THERE IS A STRUCTURE YOU CAN FOLLOW EASILY WHEN YOU READ THE FOREWORD AND THE DESCRIPTION.
CHARACTERS/CASTS (10/10)
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT (5/5) - YOUR CHARACTERS SHOW A DEVELOPMENT THROUGH THE WHOLE STORY.
OUR FOUR MAIN CHARACTERS DON'T KNOW EACH OTHER FROM THE BEGINNING AND HAVE THEIR OWN THOUGHTS ABOUT EACH OTHER WHICH CHANGES FROM CHAPTER TO CHAPTER SLOWLY BECAUSE THEY GET TO KNOW EACH OTHER.
FOR SEUNGCHEOL, HE SEEMED A BIT ARROGANT AT FIRST AND THAT HE DOESN'T TRUST, LIKE MUNGYU AND WONWOO AT ALL. BUT OVER THE STORY THAT CHANGES, WHAT I REALLY LIKE HERE IS THAT THEY DON'T KNOW EACH OTHER, THEY GET TOGETHER BECAUSE OF A MISSION LIKE IT COULD HAPPEN IN REAL LIFE BUT THEY SLOWLY GET USED TO EACH OTHER AND BECOME SOMETHING LIKE FRIENDS.
FOR SEUNGCHEOL, AS I ALREADY WROTE, HE SEEMED TO BE A BIT ARROGANT BUT LATER WHEN WE FIND OUT ABOUT HIS BACKGROUND, EVERYTHING MAKES MORE SENSE AND WE CAN ALSO SEE THAT HE IS NOT A BAD GUY. HE DEEPLY CARES FOR THE OTHER THREE.
JEONGHAN WAS A BIT OF A MIX BETWEEN A BIT ARROGANT AND JUST A GUY THAT WANTS TO PREVENT SOMETHING BAD FROM HAPPENING.
WONWOO IS A THIEF, HE DOESN'T SEEM LIKE HE WILL BE THAT HELPFUL BUT HE ACTUALLY IS BECAUSE OF HIS SKILLS. THERE ARE TIMES HE SEEMS TO BE A BIT OF A SCARY CAT BUT HE STAYS WITH HIS FRIENDS EVEN THOUGH THEY COULD DIE WHICH MAKES HIM A REALLY LOYAL PERSON. THOUGH HE IS NOT AS EDUCATED AS THE OTHERS, HE STILL IS CLEVER IN HIS OWN WAYS AND CAN PROOF HIMSELF IN DIFFERENT SITUATIONS.
FOR MINGYU, I PERSONALLY REALLY LIKE HOW EVERYBODY THINGS HE IS ONE OF THESE GUYS THAT WILL FIGHT ON YOUR SIDE AS LONG AS THE MONEY IS GOOD BUT ACTUALLY IS NOT. HE IS REALLY SMART AND CARES FOR HIS COMRADES AND WILL SAFE THEM.
OUR FOUR MAIN CHARACTERS DON'T KNOW EACH OTHER FROM THE BEGINNING AND HAVE THEIR OWN THOUGHTS ABOUT EACH OTHER WHICH CHANGES FROM CHAPTER TO CHAPTER SLOWLY BECAUSE THEY GET TO KNOW EACH OTHER.
FOR SEUNGCHEOL, HE SEEMED A BIT ARROGANT AT FIRST AND THAT HE DOESN'T TRUST, LIKE MUNGYU AND WONWOO AT ALL. BUT OVER THE STORY THAT CHANGES, WHAT I REALLY LIKE HERE IS THAT THEY DON'T KNOW EACH OTHER, THEY GET TOGETHER BECAUSE OF A MISSION LIKE IT COULD HAPPEN IN REAL LIFE BUT THEY SLOWLY GET USED TO EACH OTHER AND BECOME SOMETHING LIKE FRIENDS.
FOR SEUNGCHEOL, AS I ALREADY WROTE, HE SEEMED TO BE A BIT ARROGANT BUT LATER WHEN WE FIND OUT ABOUT HIS BACKGROUND, EVERYTHING MAKES MORE SENSE AND WE CAN ALSO SEE THAT HE IS NOT A BAD GUY. HE DEEPLY CARES FOR THE OTHER THREE.
JEONGHAN WAS A BIT OF A MIX BETWEEN A BIT ARROGANT AND JUST A GUY THAT WANTS TO PREVENT SOMETHING BAD FROM HAPPENING.
WONWOO IS A THIEF, HE DOESN'T SEEM LIKE HE WILL BE THAT HELPFUL BUT HE ACTUALLY IS BECAUSE OF HIS SKILLS. THERE ARE TIMES HE SEEMS TO BE A BIT OF A SCARY CAT BUT HE STAYS WITH HIS FRIENDS EVEN THOUGH THEY COULD DIE WHICH MAKES HIM A REALLY LOYAL PERSON. THOUGH HE IS NOT AS EDUCATED AS THE OTHERS, HE STILL IS CLEVER IN HIS OWN WAYS AND CAN PROOF HIMSELF IN DIFFERENT SITUATIONS.
FOR MINGYU, I PERSONALLY REALLY LIKE HOW EVERYBODY THINGS HE IS ONE OF THESE GUYS THAT WILL FIGHT ON YOUR SIDE AS LONG AS THE MONEY IS GOOD BUT ACTUALLY IS NOT. HE IS REALLY SMART AND CARES FOR HIS COMRADES AND WILL SAFE THEM.
CHARACTER'S RELATIONS (5/5) - THE RELATIONS ARE GOOD TOO, JUST LIKE I WROTE ABOVE, THERE IS NOT RUSH IN THE DEVELOPMENT THAT ONE CHAPTER THEY DON'T REALLY TALK TO EACH OTHER, DON'T LIKE EACH OTHER AND IN THE NEXT THEY SUDDENLY ARE BEST FRIENDS OR IN LOVE.
INSTEAD THERE IS A SLOW DEVELOPMENT IN ALL OF THEM FROM STRANGERS INTO FRIENDS THAT CARE FOR EACH OTHER AND HELP EACH OTHER OUT. IN MINGUY AND WONWOOS CASE, IT IS REALLY WELL WRITTEN HOW THEY TALK TO EACH OTHER IN THE BEGINNING, LIKE FRIENDS BUT SLOWLY DEVELOP DEEPER FEELINGS FOR EACH OTHER AND ARE NOT SHY TO SHOW THEM TO EACH OTHER.
BUT ALSO THE RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN JEONGHAN AND SEUNGCHEOL IS INTERESTING TO READ BECAUSE IT DOESN'T SEEM LIKE THEY TRUST EACH OTHER WHEN THEY FIRST MEET AND DON'T TALK MUCH TO EACH OTHER, DON'T REVEAL TO EACH OTHER MUCH ABOUT THEMSELVES BUT WITH TIME PASSES BY THEY TALK MORE, SHOW MORE ABOUT THEIR FEELINGS AND HOW THEY APPRECIATE EACH OTHERS EXISTENCE.
INSTEAD THERE IS A SLOW DEVELOPMENT IN ALL OF THEM FROM STRANGERS INTO FRIENDS THAT CARE FOR EACH OTHER AND HELP EACH OTHER OUT. IN MINGUY AND WONWOOS CASE, IT IS REALLY WELL WRITTEN HOW THEY TALK TO EACH OTHER IN THE BEGINNING, LIKE FRIENDS BUT SLOWLY DEVELOP DEEPER FEELINGS FOR EACH OTHER AND ARE NOT SHY TO SHOW THEM TO EACH OTHER.
BUT ALSO THE RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN JEONGHAN AND SEUNGCHEOL IS INTERESTING TO READ BECAUSE IT DOESN'T SEEM LIKE THEY TRUST EACH OTHER WHEN THEY FIRST MEET AND DON'T TALK MUCH TO EACH OTHER, DON'T REVEAL TO EACH OTHER MUCH ABOUT THEMSELVES BUT WITH TIME PASSES BY THEY TALK MORE, SHOW MORE ABOUT THEIR FEELINGS AND HOW THEY APPRECIATE EACH OTHERS EXISTENCE.
THE AUTHOR'S MINDSET (40/40)
LOGICALLY (10/10) - THE WHOLE STORY MADE PERFECTLY SENSE AND THERE WERE NO TIMES YOU LEFT ME IN CONFUSION ABOUT WHAT IS HAPPENING.
ORIGINALITY (10/10) - JUST LIKE I ALREADY WROTE IN THE FOREWORD, I WAS ALREADY EXPECTING IT TO BE A VERY ORIGINAL STORY AND I WAS PROOFED RIGHT WHEN I READ THE STORY BECAUSE IT IS INDEED REALLY ORIGINAL AND I CAN SAY FOR SURE THAT I NEVER READ SUCH A STORY BEFORE.
TONE (5/5) - THE STORY WAS MOSTLY REALLY CALM AND FITTED WITH THE SITUATIONS OF THEM TRAVELING AROUND AND NOT KNOWING EACH OTHER BUT WHEN IT GOT MORE SERIOUS, FIGHTING SCENES AND WHEN WE FIND OUT MORE ABOUT THE BAD GUYS, THE TONE CHANGES INTO SOMETHING MORE SERIOUS, INTENSE WHICH IS REALLY GOOD BECAUSE IT MADE READING THE STORY JUST EVEN BETTER.
NARRATION (5/5) - THE POV DIDN'T CHANGE TOO OFTEN OR TOO SUDDEN AND LIKE THAT WE WERE ABLE TO SEE HOW EACH CHARACTER IS ACTING AND HOW OTHERS ARE SEEING IT. THEN HE COULD SEE WHAT THEY THINK WHICH MADE IT EASIER TO UNDERSTAND EVERYTHING. WHAT I REALLY LIKED HERE IS THAT WE WERE ABLE TO SEE EVERYTHING WITH EXPLANATION WITHOUT YOU JUST SIMPLY STATING SOMETHING THAT WOULDN'T MAKE SENSE TO A READER.
STORYLINE (10/10) - YOUR START IS REALLY INTERESTING WITH THE PROPHECY AND HOW THE LIGHT WILL DISAPPEAR, RIGHT AWAY WE CAN SEE THAT DANGER IS AHEAD AND THE IMPORTANCE OF THE PROPHECY.
I REALLY LIKE HOW YOUR CHAPTERS ALL START WITH A PART OF SAID PROPHECY BECAUSE IT IS REALLY INTERESTING TO READ, REVEALS A BIT BUT AT THE SAME TIME IT ALSO GIVES US SOMETHING TO THINK ABOUT WHILE READING, WE CAN TRY TO FIND OUT A BIT OF THE MEANING OF THE PROPHECY.
THOUGH IT IS CLEAR FOR THE READER THAT OUR FOUR MAIN CHARACTERS WILL BE SEALS, STILL IT IS ALWAYS INTERESTING TO SEE HOW THEY FIND OUT, HOW THEY DEAL WITH IT AND THEIR PARTS IN THE STORY ALSO THROUGH THE PAST OF THEM FOR EXAMPLE IN MINGYUS CASE.
THROUGH THE WHOLE STORY YOU WERE ALWAYS ABLE TO IMPRESS ME WITH THE PROPHECY BUT ALSO HOW THERE ARE TWISTS AND TURNS IN THE STORY THAT LEFT ME SPEECHLESS. THE PLOT IS REALLY GOOD AND YOU CAN SEE THAT YOU WERE THINKING BEFORE WRITING AND THAT EVERYTHING HAS A MEANING AND IS IMPORTANT THOUGH YOU CAN'T SEE IT AT FIRST. YOUR WRITING STYLE IS ALSO MAKING THE STORY EVEN BETTER BECAUSE IT IS NICE TO READ, INTERESTING AND HOOKS YOU UP RIGHT FROM THE START.
I REALLY LIKE HOW YOUR CHAPTERS ALL START WITH A PART OF SAID PROPHECY BECAUSE IT IS REALLY INTERESTING TO READ, REVEALS A BIT BUT AT THE SAME TIME IT ALSO GIVES US SOMETHING TO THINK ABOUT WHILE READING, WE CAN TRY TO FIND OUT A BIT OF THE MEANING OF THE PROPHECY.
THOUGH IT IS CLEAR FOR THE READER THAT OUR FOUR MAIN CHARACTERS WILL BE SEALS, STILL IT IS ALWAYS INTERESTING TO SEE HOW THEY FIND OUT, HOW THEY DEAL WITH IT AND THEIR PARTS IN THE STORY ALSO THROUGH THE PAST OF THEM FOR EXAMPLE IN MINGYUS CASE.
THROUGH THE WHOLE STORY YOU WERE ALWAYS ABLE TO IMPRESS ME WITH THE PROPHECY BUT ALSO HOW THERE ARE TWISTS AND TURNS IN THE STORY THAT LEFT ME SPEECHLESS. THE PLOT IS REALLY GOOD AND YOU CAN SEE THAT YOU WERE THINKING BEFORE WRITING AND THAT EVERYTHING HAS A MEANING AND IS IMPORTANT THOUGH YOU CAN'T SEE IT AT FIRST. YOUR WRITING STYLE IS ALSO MAKING THE STORY EVEN BETTER BECAUSE IT IS NICE TO READ, INTERESTING AND HOOKS YOU UP RIGHT FROM THE START.
PROPER USE OF THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE (24/25)
PROPER GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION (9/10) - OVERALL THERE IS NOTHING MUCH TO SAY HERE BECAUSE THERE WERE NO MAJOR MISTAKES.
STILL IT WOULDN'T BE BAD TO BETA READ YOUR CHAPTERS ONCE AGAIN BECAUSE OF MISTAKES LIKE: WIHT INSTEAD OF WITH WHICH PROBABLY COMES FROM WRITING A BIT TOO FAST.
STILL IT WOULDN'T BE BAD TO BETA READ YOUR CHAPTERS ONCE AGAIN BECAUSE OF MISTAKES LIKE: WIHT INSTEAD OF WITH WHICH PROBABLY COMES FROM WRITING A BIT TOO FAST.
TERMINOLOGY (5/5) - YOUR VOCABULARY IS GOOD, THERE IS NO OVERUSE OF ANY SPECIFIC WORD OR PHRASES BUT DIFFERENT WORDS.
LANGUAGE BARRIER (10/10) - THERE WAS NO OVERUSE OF ANY OTHER LANGUAGE BESIDES ENGLISH SO VERY GOOD.
REVIEWER'S ENJOYMENT (5/5)
I REALLY ENJOYED READING YOUR STORY BECAUSE I AM A FAN OF FANTASY BUT ALSO BECAUSE OF YOUR WRITING STYLE AND HOW EVERYTHING FITTED SO WELL IN THE STORY.
THE PROPHECY IS REALLY INTERESTING AND I COULDN'T HELP BUT TO BE CURIOUS HOW LONG YOU HAD TO WORK ON IT UNTIL THE END PRODUCT CAME OUT. YOUR WRITING STYLE HOOKED ME UP FROM THE START AND ALL I CAN SAY IS THAT THIS STORY REALLY IS AMAZING.
THE PROPHECY IS REALLY INTERESTING AND I COULDN'T HELP BUT TO BE CURIOUS HOW LONG YOU HAD TO WORK ON IT UNTIL THE END PRODUCT CAME OUT. YOUR WRITING STYLE HOOKED ME UP FROM THE START AND ALL I CAN SAY IS THAT THIS STORY REALLY IS AMAZING.
Comments