NOTE: Rated M + Six Chapters (Ongoing/20 chapters in all)

(8/10) Title: The title is "Happy Ending Without Ending", that's quite a unique title! But it's a bit long, perhaps something with two to three words? It's not catchy to some is what I'm trying to get across to you. Then again, I don't mind the title since it makes total sense and ties well with the storyline. The story title was making its appearance when Sunggyu (love him!) wrote down his story(ies). 

(7/10) Character: I love each characters/idols honestly; however, there were too many characters and each are just there to be there. Like, I feel they had no purpose really and I wish to see more character devlopment between each characters. Sunggyu developed beautifully, he went from wanting to be alone to having the need to be around Woohyun. He was trying to fit in after doing his gang a favor and he did just that. Woohyun however confuses me, at first I felt he liked his gang and cares about then after hanging out with Sunggyu, he's suddenly annoyed by their presence, near chapter six. I just want to see more of the other characters because G-Dragon, Yongguk, and Kris seems to be the antagonist but their personalities aren't clear. Jiyong seems cool and cute at the beginning then all of a sudden he's cold during Sungjong's scene. Since I'm familiar with all idols it was easy to follow through the story, but as I mentioned earlier, other characters need some more story background to them. Like how did they become a part of the gang, what did they do to become a part of that gang? And who was Sehun, just Luhan's "lover" at the time and just a boy with a car? The gang consists only of G-Dragon, Yongguk, Kris, Myungsoo, Kibum, Woohyun, and Luhan right? 

(9/10) Originality: The story felt real and can easily be related to and follow through. The drinking and smoking at age 17 (WOW) is truly amazing (lol). That's some bad kids but hey that's the story and I enjoyed that part exactly. Also, why are ninth graders 17 years old? Or is it just Sunggyu? (2014-1997=17, where I got his age). Is Woohyun 16 then?

(30/40) Storyline/Plot: Honestly, as much as I love the storyline, the story itself was not catchy. The progression of the storyline was quite slow, I remember reading on and on about Sunggyu getting on Woohyun's motorbike. (Maybe it's because I'm at work and keep re-reading that part) but I could honestly tell you, the progression was slow. Also it tends to skip around. Why was Woohyun driving near the end, wasn't it Sehun's car? Other than that, I enjoy the storyline a lot, also the death of his friends was SOOOOO sad but at the same time I didn't catch the sudden flashback or memory. I really feel bad for Sunggyu (just because he's one of my biases in Infinite, Inspirits!) and what he has to go through to "fit" in. I'll be reading all 20 chapters because I believe that's what you put down as the end of the story, and I really dying to see the end of this story!

(15/25) Grammar/Errors: I know English isn't your first language but I want you to proofread your work. I found a lot of errors and honestly too many that made me lose my interest. Your tenses were all over the place and there were incorrect words (listed below) Other than that I love how you use a vast variety of dictions and words. I'm impress! Just work on your tenses, proofread and you should be awesome! There were many areas where words were left out and ending quotes were also left out. If I were to post all the errors, I'll take up a lot of space here and I'm sure you knew better, but as writers we do tend to make those common errors so just make sure you fix those. I strongly recommend Microsoft Word, it'll make your writing better! 

writed = wrote (past tense of write) // writed isn't a word

"The storied Sunggyu writed were full of happy endings" = The stories written by Sunggyu were full of happy endings./The stories Sunggyu wrote were full of happy endings./Stories written by Sunggyu always has a happy ending. (There are many ways to go! Point being, storied + writed are not words.)

(4/5) Overall Enjoyment: I love it! The only problem was that I tend to space out while reading because it wasn't very catchy until certain points of the story. Like the death of his friends, I mean that was a great twist to it. It also led to where he started out as having a fear of people. So that connected well. I've subsribed and upvoted so I will definitely be looking for more updates from you author!

(73/100) Points Total

Bonus: Your questions and focuses for us:

"The romance will start to show in the end so kinda everything else"

Well, I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE THE ROMANCE BETWEEN THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -fangirl mode: activated- 

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