NOTE: 8 chapters (Spoiler Alert)

(7/10) Title: The title fits perfectly with the story. It was meaningful, likes how Areum creates bonds and trusts between EXO and herself, the Road of trust.

(8/10) Character: Since your writing 13 characters in this story, you describe them really well, especially Areum, how she tried to be a Gurdian, and her personalities. It didn't confused to read through the story. Luhan seems like a good eldest brother, and the rest especially Baekhyun, Chanyeol, Tao,Jongdae, Jongin are really trouble makers.

(5/10) Originality: This kind of stories are writen by most of authors now, it is really normal to see this kind of stories and sometimes they all look the same (OCs are destined to protect the warriors, OCs is the key to help the people from that planet so they need to protect her, etc.) So this story is kinda normal.

(29/40) Storyline/Plot: Once again, the storyline and the plot are really good all the things are develop well. But sometimes there are too many characters and the story look crowded but you manage to arrange and organize them nicely, it was really good for you to do that. Since you write too many characters, it kinda troublesome to remember the characters' mood, powers, personalilities, the things that happened around them, etc, it was tiresome.

(15/25) Grammar/Errors: The grammar is okay, but therr have some mistakes/Errors. For example: "That was very brave of you to do." Kyungsoo said. Correction: "That was very brave of you to do that," Kyungsoo said. "I heard that." Baekhyun squinted his eyes at his friend. Correction: "I heard that," Baekhyun squinted his eyes at his friend. Have you seen the different? You are confused how to use coma, full stop, exclamation mark and where to use them. You shouldn't end the conservation with a full stop if you still have to write something after the conservation. For example: "Oh, you 're up." Yixing was the first to get up and come closer to her. Correction: "Oh, you are up," Yixing was the first to get up and come closer to her. 

And the exclamation mark, you should use it like : "Kris, Kris!" not "Kris! Kris!" or "Hey, who do you think you are talking to?!" not "Hey! Who do you think you are talking to!" or "Jongdae, wait!" not "Jongdae! Wait!" About the asking and answering conservation : "How are you feeling? Yixing asks with concern. "I am fine," she answers with a dry voice. Your skills in past tense and present tense are really good, there's no problem with those .

(3/5) Overall Enjoyment: I really enjoy the story but the wrong use of coma, full stop and exclamation mark annoyed me sometimes. The first few chapters are interesting but after that it's kinda okay? I don't usually read ot12 stories but I like this! I hope you can do well in your stories, good luck<3

(100) Points Total

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