NOTE: One Shot - /Yuri

(9/10) Title: The title fit so well into the story, it's practically the story (lol). However, I thought the story would be heavy music based. but I wasn't disappointed in any way. Great job!

(10/10) Character: I believed all the characters developed quite well in the short amount of time you have to displayed. I love all the characters, however, I was curious as to why Kyungsoo took the gambling route? From what I got from Jongin, he was just hooked recently. But, was he already a gambiler addict? I love how Chanyeol's love turned into an obession, usually in a lot of dramas the main usually just move on, but his, was a strong kind of love. 

(10/10) Originality: The story was so surreal and unique. In your foreword there was a trailer for the story and when I saw Suho hugging Baekhyun in the video, I thought he was going to cheat on Chanyeol with Suho! But Suho didn't even show up and the twist of that trailer and your story was very interesting! Although the story was short/one-shot, I would have loved it more even if it's chaptered. Good job there!

(38/40) Storyline/Plot: It was interesting when you begin using the lead's POVs. I got to see both thoughts and inputs on it so kudos there. (When I write, I never use character's POV, it's always third person, but your story really made me think if I should start one or not, using POVs). The  storyline was beautifully written, I couldn't foretell anything and predict any upcoming scenes either. Kudos there! 

(20/25) Grammar/Errors: You mentioned you knew about your critical grammar errors, but there's two things I wanted to point out, just so you'll be aware of it when you write other stories. Run-ons were probably one of your weakest point. I really recommend those commas. Just work on your fluff and run ons and then you're good. 

(5/5) Overall Enjoyment: I loved it. I love tragedies and your one shot just happened to be my favorite tragedy as of right now! Kudos!

(92/100) Points Total

Bonus: Your questions and focuses for us:

Plotting: I thought the plot wasn't bad at all, in fact it's rare and catchy. 

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