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Author: KangminBread 
Reviewed By: Eunriehyun

Requested Date: 10/06/15
Story Link: Link
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Title: 10/10

Logical: 3/3

Since the beginning you explain the significant of the title. As in beast for Kang....and beauty as for Min. 
Eye-catching: 3/3
The first thing that brought my curiosity was the et as in 'and' in french. I've never seen that before so it was a must read to calm down my curious self.
Eye-catching: 4/4
Although, is not quiet original from "Beauty and the beast".... I loved the fact that you inserted the French word and that made it your own.

Description/Foreword: 10/10 plus 5 for amazing me...

Summary: 5/5

My, I surely must give you credit! Such an amazing description and the foreword *sighs heavenly* 
Appearance: 5/5
I truly love the layout and the background of the text. 

Character Development/Showcasing: 10/10

Development: 5/5

Min's character since the begin knew it wanted to protect his dearest no matter what,and then when he return four hundred years later he was changing because of this dearest. I turtle loved Kang's role hear. He was so heartaching and fascinating!  
Relation/Cast: 5/5
Kang was in good terms with everyone, and I liked the way he never expected anything for the newly Min even if it meant giving up on the past. With Kyu he was in a good shape, I could his regrets were true and Eunhae w just thier self.

Behind the Author's Mind: 40/40

Logical: 10/10

  To me it made sense, all of it.
Original: 10/10
I had thought it would one of those fics where it would try to bring the original story to life,but surprisingly your version was delightful. 
Tone: 5/5
The story's tone was  good as far I  know.

Naration: 5/5

I could tell you worked hard for this successful story by the way you describe and told each scene to the reader.  
Storyline: 10/10
I love the storyline to the core!!! What else can I say. 

Proper Use of the English Language: 21/25

Proper Grammar/Punctuation: 06/10

Now here is were you must work on... I found some mistakes in the space making, the additional letter in some words and some misplace words,but it can be corrected. 
Termonology: 5/5
The dialogue was established in a easy way the readers could follow and every imaginary.  
Language Barrier: 10/10
No problem. 

General Enjoyment/Last Comment: 5/5 plus ten!
Personally, I would have never read a story that involved Kangmin, but I'm glad I came upon your request. I'm very honest when I say that I hate reading things forcefully, but with your story it was almost natural. I was so into it that I almost cried because of Kang's moments whenever he told Min about him or when Min thought Kang had confused him with the other guy. I just couldn't stop reading it!! I love it. I do hope you  consider making a squeal(although is pretty much complete as it is). And -I can't believe I'm saying this- but I really hope you can recommend some good Kangmin stories.

Total: 106/100