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(2/10) Title:Your title is nothing special, there are plenty of other stories with this title. When you want to write a story and look for a title how about just use the search function of this side in order to find out how many other stories with the title you want to use are already existing. It makes your story common, nothing special so there is no reason for a person who reads the story to read it. 

(/10) Character:I can't really much about the characters yet because there are no chapters yet so there is nothing to say because just by reading your foreword I can't really say something about the characters. 

(5/10) Originality: I already read stories with a similar story line thought I have to say that it is the first time I read about someone who seems to be a supporter of Jiyong and Kiko so I credit that as a point of originality.

(/40) Storyline/Plot: As I already wrote above it is not a new story line and because there are no chapters yet I can't say that your storyline may be nothing new but the way you write about it makes it special.

(/25) Grammar/Errors: I don't see mayor mistakes and actually I have to read a chapter in order to be able to write here more.

(/5) Overall Enjoyment:I can't write something here because there is nothing expect for the foreword I can read. 

(100) Points Total

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