NOTE: One Shot (Spoiler Alert)

(10/10) Title: P-E-R-F-E-C-T. Perfect for the storyline along with the plot. I searched it up on AFF and your story seems to be the only one titled Summer Bullets. Amazing job here!

(10/10) Character: All the characters were used perfectly well into the story! Chunji and L.Joe's characters really stood out and were beautifully executed. Niel's as well. I loved how they begin spending more and more time together as Chunji sleeps where Ljoe digs (That's cute ^_^). 

(10/10) Originality: Ahhhh the feels~~ So real and so good! I love how it's a completely different kind of story, one where a military man visits a high school to teach the students but ended up falling for the one student who he starts to pay a lot of attention to. 

(40/40) Storyline/Plot: I really love the storyline and its plot. I'm glad it wasn't a lust or story, rather it was pure and flowery. It's a story I can't explain using words alone but actions, I squealed throughout the whole story, really. (Because it happens to have all of my three biaes from Teen Top, so I was super excited when I saw the story). I love how after they set up an appointment, Chunji didn't show up due to his reasons, and then time was fast forward to when LJoe became a grandpa of two. That was probably the best twist I've ever seen, I was thrown off guard cause I didn't expect that sort of scene (lol). Chunji's letter that LJoe finally found got me smiling like an idiot, ah! It was truly beautiful~ It was easy to follow, a fun read, and I could imagine all the scenes! 

(24.5/25) Grammar/Errors: English isn't your first language?! Well kudos, I thought you were an English native speaker! Of the whole one shot I only saw about two minor errors, other than that everything was great and you kept your tense to the end. Your vast usage of grammar and dictions really came across well, it was a pleasant and relaxed read. 

(6/5, can I do that? xD)5/5) Overall Enjoyment: Max points. The story itself is just ugh... too beautiful for words (lol). Of all the stories I've read thus far, yours just topped all the other stories. I'm so glad I got to review (read since I can't say I was doing a great job at reviewing since I was really into the story) this story! I want a sequel.... But then again it could be strange since LJoe and Chunji would be really old >.> Ah~ Anywho I upvoted, will continue to subscribe so I can read it again some other time, ex: to kill stress (lol). 

(99.5/100) Points Total

Bonus: Your questions and focuses for us:

please focus on the plot as well as the characters: Plot and characters are under storyline/plot and character xD

I'm wondering if my writing still feels rather novice. that is all: Novice? Nope, one of the best writer I have seen thus far! Love your style!

Again thanks so much for choosing me as your reviewer. Of all the requests I believe you scored the highest~! It's too bad we don't feature stories with top scores here like some other shops, but I strongly suggest you advertise this story! It deserves more attention! ^_^

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