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(10/10) Title:Okay, I must say that I love your title. It’s original and it made me curious the very first moment I saw it, really. It caught my attention and it made me want to figure out the meaning behind this title, hence it made me want to keep reading your story. 

(7/10) Character: Well, I think the characters are very well described. So far there has been no contradictions with their respective personalities. But I think the main characters are a little bit cliché, especially if we are talking about Jungkook, the typical cold and popular guy, who doesn’t give a damn for the world and such. However I like them so far. Yet to give you the full score I have to see their evolutions throughout time and you are just starting the story so it’s very understandable. Oh and I love their humor, you know. 

(4/10) Originality: I must give you a low score in this one. This seems very cliché so far, I don’t know if you are going to put a lot of twists to make it more unique, but now I can say that it’s a pretty common storyline. Although I live very much the description and the foreword, it was original of you to put the definition of fluff on the foreword, really. 

(20/40) Storyline/Plot: As is said before I think it’s a very common plot, but I enjoyed it. Your writing style and the characters helped a lot in this category. Besides I have a feeling that you are going to put some twists to make it more interesting. And I can’t forget about the flow too since it was very well managed, because the story it’s not going to fast or too slow, it’s just perfect. However I must say that the first chapter was I little bit boring and this may be dangerous, you know. You have to make it appealing to make me want to keep reading your story.

(22.5/25) Grammar/Errors: In general your grammar it’s pretty good, it’s fluent as well. But you made a few mistakes. You put words where you didn’t need them, but nothing big. I enjoy of your writing style, since it was fluent and full of good descriptions, especially when you were describing the internal forum of the characters, very well written. 

You made a recurrent mistake. For example:

You put – “Hello, nice to meet you,” he said.

But it must be like this – “Hello, nice to meet you.” He said.

Apart from that, you did really well with the grammar.

(3/5) Overall Enjoyment: 

I enjoyed you story so far. It’s cute and compromising. The story is well written and the characters are likable. Yet it’s not my kind of story, but it’s good and I can’t deny it, so keep the good work!

(66.5100) Points Total

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