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(10/10) Title: Title is direct and eye-catching. It's not the most creative title for the story, but if I were to browse around and come across this story I would have read it, due to its title. 

(9.5/10) Character: Since it is a short story I can't say the characters were developed or whatnot, but from reading about the war they've went through, etc. I can tell Eunji and Suho are brave and strong elves. As far as Eunji's attire, I was wondering how the others were dressed as well. 

(10/10) Originality: I loved the whole idea of this short story. I've never read anything like it here on Asian Fan Fiction so I was impressed with its unique and interesting storyline. 

(39/40) Storyline/Plot: The storyline was basically Suho wanting to show Eunji something great he'd surpassed as the others couldn't, and Eunji was thinking back on the war they fought and how she had met Suho. The story was really short so I can't sense any plot or the main plot of the story. But the storyline overall was a fun read. 

(24/25) Grammar/Errors: The "E" in Elf is always capitalize, I doubt it hardly matters but just wanted to point that out, because there are certain areas where I would lowercase it. There were very little errors, seeing that English is your first language afterall. Kudos here, below are just two sentences I wanted to point out~

Original: "Kris?" Her companion asked after a half an hour had passed.

Suggestion: "Eunji?" Her companion asked after half an hour had passed. (Kris was mentioned, must have been a typo because Suho was talking to Eunji?)

Original: Many an Elf had tried, and failed, to locate the festival, but it seemed that Suho had succeeded.

Suggestion: Many elves had tried and failed to locate the festival, but it seemed that Suho had succeeded. 

(4/5) Overall Enjoyment: I enjoyed this story, although the ending came quicker than what I had expected, I still wanted more of this story. And as someone who isn't a big fan of EXO, I'm glad I got to read this story~ It was worth it and I upvoted it because it deserved it. Well done. 

(96.5/100) Points Total

Bonus: Your questions and focuses for us:

originality: It is definitely an original story. I've never read one like it before so all I have to say is that it was short, stunning, and sweet.

grammar: Can be found under grammar/errors. :D

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