Your Reflection, a Pale Imitation - baekforu
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REQUEST ON: 12/20/15
REVIEWER: BLACKROSESTEARS
FINISHED ON: 1/15/15
SCORE: 91/100
TITLE: (10/10)
LOGICAL (3/3) - I COULD SEE A CONNECTION BETWEEN THE TITLE AND THE PLOT SO IT MAKES SENSE WHY YOU CHOSE IT.
EYE-CATCHING (3/3) - IT IS A REALLY INTERESTING TITLE BECAUSE WHEN YOU READ IT FOR THE FIRST TIME, YOU CAN'T HELP BUT ASK YOURSELF ABOUT THE MEANING BEHIND IT SO IT WAS DEFINITELY EYE-CATCHING.
ORIGINAL (4/4) - THERE ARE NO OTHER STORIES WITH THE SAME OR SIMILAR TITLES SO IT IS ALSO REALLY ORIGINAL.
STORY'S FOREWORD/DESCRIPTION (10/10)
STORY'S SUMMARY (5/5) - IT DOESN'T REVEAL MUCH AND IS NOT THAT LONG BUT STILL IT SOUNDS INTERESTING THAT YOU WANT TO READ IT. IT IS JUST LIKE A JOURNEY INTO THE DARK TO SATISFY YOUR CURIOSITY.
APPEARANCE (5/5) - THE STRUCTURE IS NICE, EVERYTHING LOOKS NEAT AND IT IS GOOD TO READ.
CHARACTERS/CASTS (6/10)
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT (3/5) - THE WAY THE STORY IS RIGHT NOW IT IS HARD TO SAY IF THERE IS SOME CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT. SURE YOU WROTE THAT MINSEOK CHANGED FROM A PERSON THAT HAS TO BE IN CONTROL AND A CLEAN ROOM INTO A PERSON WHO DOESN'T CARE ABOUT A CLEAN ROOM ANYMORE AS LONG AS JONGDAE IS WITH HIM BUT IT HERE IT WOULD BE NICE TO ACTUALLY SEE THESE CHANGES BECAUSE IT WOULD MAKE IT EASIER TO FEEL WITH YOUR CHARACTERS AND EVERYTHING THAT HAPPENS IN YOUR STORY.
SO IT IS JUST A TEXT TO READ WITHOUT BEING ABLE TO FEEL A CONNECTION TO IT WHICH MAKES IT FOR PEOPLE LIKE ME HARD TO READ AND LIKE IT.
CHARACTER'S RELATIONS (3/5) - THERE WERE NO REAL INTERACTIONS BETWEEN CHARACTERS TO WRITE HERE ABOUT, ONLY DESCRIPTIONS THAT WERE NICE TO READ BUT I STILL MISSED THE REAL INTERACTION BETWEEN YOUR CHARACTERS.
THE AUTHOR'S MINDSET (37/40)
LOGICALLY (10/10) - THE STORY DID MAKE SENSE WHILE READING, THERE WERE NO TIMES YOU WERE TOTALLY CONFUSED.
ORIGINALITY (10/10) - I DIDN'T REALLY READ STORY THAT WITH THIS PLOT LIKE THIS BEFORE.
TONE (5/5) - THE TONE ALWAYS FITTED THE SITUATION OF THE STORY SO THERE IS NOTHING TO SAY HERE.
NARRATION (5/5) - THE FOCUS IS MAINLY ON MINSEOK AND THERE ARE NO MISTAKES IN IT THOUGH IT WOULD BE NICE TO HAVE PARTS WITH MORE FOCUS ON JONGDAE TOO.
STORYLINE (7/10) - ALL IN ALL IT IS A STORY ABOUT MINSEOK WHO LIKES TO BE IN CONTROL IN HIS LIFE, HIS APARTMENT HAS TO BE CLEAN BUT THIS CHANGES AFTER HE MEETS JONGDAE. THERE IS SOMETHING ABOUT JONGDAE THAT CATCHES MINSEOKS INTEREST SO HE TRIES TO MEET THE OTHER AGAIN AND AGAIN UNTIL HE IS WITH HIM ALMOST EVERY DAY. MINSEOK LIKES HOW JONGDAE IS A SIMPLE GUY AND THAT THERE ARE MANY THINGS STILL UNKNOWN TO HIM.
BECAUSE OF JONGDAE, MINSEOK FOUND SOMETHING THAT IS MORE IMPORTANT TO HIM THAT HIS PERFECT LIFE, HE KNOWS THAT JONGDAE IS NOT PERFECT BUT IT SEEMS LIKE THIS DOESN'T BOTHER HIM.
BECAUSE OF JONGDAE, MINSEOK FOUND SOMETHING THAT IS MORE IMPORTANT TO HIM THAT HIS PERFECT LIFE, HE KNOWS THAT JONGDAE IS NOT PERFECT BUT IT SEEMS LIKE THIS DOESN'T BOTHER HIM.
IN THE END IT SOUNDED LIKE A MESSAGE OF THE STORY WAS THAT AS LONG AS THERE IS STILL SOMETHING UNKNOWN TO YOU ABOUT THE PERSON YOU LIKE, THE RELATIONSHIP WILL STAY INTERESTING, AN ADVENTURE.
IT WAS A MESSAGE I REALLY LIKED BECAUSE IT REMINDED ME OF AN AUTHOR THAT HAD THIS OPINION . YOUR WRITING STYLE IS PRETTY NICE TOO SO THE ONLY THING I HAVE TO SAY HERE IS THAT IT IS A PITY THAT IT IS SO SHORT BECAUSE IT WAS HARD TO FIND A WAY INTO THE STORY. THOUGH IT MADE SENSE WHILE READING THERE WERE STILL TIMES IT WAS HARD TO UNDERSTAND THE STORY RIGHT AWAY SO IT WOULD BE NICE TO READ MORE DETAILS IN THE STORY FOR EXAMPLE SHOWING HOW MINSEOK CHANGES HIS VIEW OF THE THINGS. HOW JONGDAE GETS MORE IMPORTANT TO HIM BIT BY BIT.
IT WAS A MESSAGE I REALLY LIKED BECAUSE IT REMINDED ME OF AN AUTHOR THAT HAD THIS OPINION . YOUR WRITING STYLE IS PRETTY NICE TOO SO THE ONLY THING I HAVE TO SAY HERE IS THAT IT IS A PITY THAT IT IS SO SHORT BECAUSE IT WAS HARD TO FIND A WAY INTO THE STORY. THOUGH IT MADE SENSE WHILE READING THERE WERE STILL TIMES IT WAS HARD TO UNDERSTAND THE STORY RIGHT AWAY SO IT WOULD BE NICE TO READ MORE DETAILS IN THE STORY FOR EXAMPLE SHOWING HOW MINSEOK CHANGES HIS VIEW OF THE THINGS. HOW JONGDAE GETS MORE IMPORTANT TO HIM BIT BY BIT.
PROPER USE OF THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE (25/25)
PROPER GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION (10/10) - I DIDN'T FIND ANY MAJOR MISTAKES IN THE STORY.
TERMONOLOGY (5/5) - YOUR VOCABULARY WAS GOOD IN THE STORY, THERE WAS NO OVERUSE OF SOME WORDS OR PHRASES WHICH MADE IT MORE INTERESTING TO READ.
LANGUAGE BARRIER (10/10) - THERE IS ALSO NO OVERUSE OF THE KOREAN LANGUAGE.
REVIEWER'S ENJOYMENT (3/5)
I DID LIKE READING THE STORY BECAUSE OF THE MESSAGE I WAS TALKING ABOUT THOUGH I AM NOT SURE WHETHER THAT WAS WHAT YOU WHERE TRYING TO SAY OR NOT. STILL IT WAS HOW I UNDERSTOOD THE STORY.
STILL I WAS NOT ABLE TO LIKE THE STORY WITH MY WHOLE HEART BECAUSE I AM A PERSON THAT LIKES TO FEEL A CONNECTION TO THE CHARACTERS WHICH WAS HARD TO FIND HERE.
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