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(10/10) Title: Your title is short and doesn't reveal that much. I don't know what exactly it is but  there is something about your title that I liked that made me curious about the story. Also I wanted to know what exactly you wanted to say with the fear because there are so many fears in this world.

(10/10) Character: I love Suzy and L, they are special in this story not like the rest even though at the beginning they are so young. They are so different than the others but that is what makes your story special and what I really like about them. Suzy is the perfect main character, young, beautiful and intelligent. L is also intelligent but he is also a bit weird and that is his charm. They are so lively and their friendship is so precious. Also it was like I was part of the story just because of your characters. (But like some of your readers: Jun over L? :O)

(10/10) Originality: I never read such a story before, the plot is really unique and interesting. I love the way you put love and fear together in this story because there are indeed not many stories that have this content.

(40/40) Storyline/Plot: You describe the whole situation beautifully so the reader has pictures in his/her head. You begin to introduce everything slowly and how they first met, which was by the way so cute and adorable. The way you described it made me squeal. It is good that you don't reveal too much at once but every chapter a bit because your story is really interesting and fascinating that you want to know more and more and can't stop reading it. And I love the way you end each chapter with a matching quote, maybe because I am a er for quotes but I think it rounds the chapter well.  Also the way you describe in every chapter again that they are different from the others is interesting and the little things they do like L makes them a radio out of a phone. Also there are surprises in the story that make the story interesting and readable too. 

(25/25) Grammar/Errors: There are no errors neither in grammar or language that I found while reading.

(5/5) Overall Enjoyment: You can probably already guess but I really enjoyed reading your story so far that I even think I will continue to read it after finishing this review.

(100/100) Points Total

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