Story: Dirty Beat

Requestor's Username: RedFeather

Reviewer's AFF Name: KaihleeLo

Date Received - Date Completed: 5 August 2014

NOTE: None

(10/10) Title: The title fitted with the storyline and plot perfectly! Kudos to you there!

(9/10) Character: Each character development progresses nicely. However Suho/Junmyeon's character seem to be stuck in the past and present, it wasn't a big issue. But other than that I could imagine each character in their own situations exactly the way you described it. Jongin's personality and traits stick with him till the end and that was well done! Great job!

(10/10) Originality: The reality and feels of the story is real and fun to read because of its twists and how it was described. I was basically watching a drama because it was that good! I loved it. 

(40/40) Storyline/Plot: The storyline was beautifully written! It's completely different from other fics I've read! It really stood out and I was stuck in the story because it was just so real! I really loved how different each character are and how their paths cross. Especially how Junmyeon got caught in that situation, made me squeal. I even envied his position for a brief moment! Absolutely gorgeous storyline you have going on. 

(23/25) Grammar/Errors: English isn't your first language?! You've got to be kidding! The way you word and describe each scenes made it a more interesting read! Minor errors, like forgetting and leaving out a word every now and then. Sentence structure didn't bother me since every word usage in there was meaningful. 

(5/5) Overall Enjoyment: I enjoyed and loved it. I'm not a big EXO fan but hey, your story made me squealed and angry just as much as if the idols were my biases. I subscribed and up-voted because it deserved it! I'll continue reading Dirty Beat because I'm dying of curiosity as to what will happen next. 

(97/100) Points Total  Nicely Done!

Bonus: Your questions and focuses for us:

"It would be nice if you can give more attention to the character development, as well as the flow."

You mentioned that you thought the story's progression was moving too fast. I thought the flow and pace of it was just right! I could see the story ending with a cliffhanger because it's that just good! 

Thank you for choosing BLK Reviews and for your patience! Hope to hear from you again!