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Author: Light_Archer
Reviewed By: Eunriehyun
Requested Date: 01/10/16
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Title: 10/10
Logical: 3/3
The title immediately gave the science fiction out and made it even better than any other possible upcoming title.
Eye-catching: 3/3
It was eye catching and fresh.
Eye-catching: 4/4
The title was unique and full of surprises.
Description/Foreword: 10/10
Summary: 5/5
The description of the story was good to the point of making the readers ask themselves multiple questions before reading this marvelous story.
Appearance: 5/5
Well presented and organized.
Character Development/Showcasing: 10/10
Development: 5/5
Mari grow up a lot from the first chapter to the last and it pained me that her love wasnt back physically but...he will always be with her,right? (T.T)
Relation/Cast: 5/5
Each relationship Mari made was based on trust and true friendship. I could easily view them as your kids next door.
Behind the Author's Mind: 36/40
Logical: 10/10
To me it was logical and it had potential.
Original: 6/10
I viewedthe mv and made the comparison between the story and the video and I was surprised to see a great development. Although, the plot wasn't yours as it belonged to VIXX, you made it your own. Which was good for you.
Tone: 5/5
The tone was good and it was thoughtful.
Naration: 5/5
The narration of the story was easy to follow and very good.
Storyline: 10/10
An amazing storyline! It had action, love, melodrama, mystery, and so much more to offer. It gave the reader vivid images of the story.
Proper Use of the English Language: 25/25
Proper Grammar/Punctuation: 10/10
It appeared to be free of errors.^^
Termonology: 5/5
Well use vocabulary and organized structures.
Language Barrier: 10/10
No problem at all.
General Enjoyment/Last Comment: 5/5
I almost cried at the end...I was reading Ken's message when a song in my Playlist started: Tabi no tochuu performed by Natsumi Kiyoura and it just made the whole chapter mode angst and more touchy. It was a good read.
Total: 96/100
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