Story: -Opposites-

Requestor's Username: kpopulzzangforever

Reviewer's AFF Name: KaihleeLo

Date Received - Date Completed: 1 August 2014 
 

(7/10) Title: The title is interesting but isn't very catchy since Opposites could indicate anything, I dock a few points. Since the story is still ongoing and is only beginning I'm hoping to see more of how the title ties into the story's plot!

(8/10) Character: I love how each character was introduced in the foreword alongside a quote they will soon come to say. Since the story is, again, still progressing I haven't seen any character development. I would like to see more of their personalities! For example (spoilers for viewers), Key is the rich student, seems dumb, etc but then somehow he's also heroic in a sense. He seems to be dislike by his peers but at the same time it's like he isn't.

(9/10) Originality: The origin or location of this story confused me a bit. I understand they are Koreans but her dad and maid have American names? Since she had to wear uniform I was positive the story takes place in Korea. Maybe elaborate on why her father's name is Ethan and her maid is Avery. Other than that the story seems realistic and predictable.

(30/40) Storyline/Plot: I could not sense any plot although the storyline is very unique and fresh to me! That's a plus! Each chapter seems to be written in one of the leads point of view and that confused me for a while. I thought I was still reading from the same perspective as one of the leads but then it doesn't sound like his or her situation, maybe in the beginning of each chapter give a description of what they were doing first via include their names, then jump into the first person. On the last chapter Key and Hana were in a first person description so try to focus on only one character at a time. I feel chapter three was Key's point of view but when Hana finished her speech and her feelings were described as "I" it really confused me.

(20/25) Grammar/Errors: I wasn't very picky on grammars, although there were minor errors like forgetting to include another word and sentence structure. Ex: You wrote, "Everyone went to go chat and their friends and socialized with their friends, everyday Ms.Hans lets us socialize before the big game." Try to be concise, we understood it the first time when you said they can talk/socialize so try not to repeat the description using different words. Other than that I enjoyed all the action words usage so great job!

(5/5) Overall Enjoyment: Like mentioned, I love the storyline. I love how Key is the richest kid but he's not the most popular kid, that's a great twist to it. It made my morning reading your story thanks bunches! I can't wait for Chanyeol to come in and what you have planned for the four!

Bonus: For your A/N, I think Naeun's dream will have something to do with Chanyeol, but I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

(79/100) Points Total

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