A blaze of white light-- Meichan
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Author: Meichan
Reviewed By: Eunriehyun
Requested Date: 01/06/16
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Q: How enjoyable
A: Very enjoyable. I liked that even though time had pass between Yongbae and Jiyong, it seemed that it was okay and they were patching things up. I liked that Seungri had the guts to build a band even when he was most of the time terrified of the unusual, now band mates. I liked it and the flow of your story is good and heart touching.
Review
Title: 10/10
Logical: 3/3
I can understand why is called A blaze of white light perfectly stating that is part a performance or something that will finally become unite.
Eye-catching: 3/3
It was alright.
Eye-catching: 4/4
I honestly think it could a better title but it isn't bad. I would've click on it if I was looking for a good read.^^
Description/Foreword: 10/10
Summary: 5/5
It was short. It was simple. Perfect.
Appearance: 5/5
Well organized and I liked that you explained your story's path. Nice.
Character Development/Showcasing: 09/10
Development: 4/5
Seungri was improving at a regular pace, Yongbae, was my favorite and really hope he could have a back bone /: Still wondering what happend to him. Jiyong is so cool and he gave my heart a squeeze. Daesung and Seunghyun are okay.
Relation/Cast: 5/5
The boys' relationship is coming together and a bond is forming. Very slowly but it is showing.
Behind the Author's Mind: 40/40
Logical: 10/10
It made sense and it was good.
Original: 10/10
It appeared to be an original plot.
Tone: 5/5
Not bad.
Naration: 5/5
Well organized and the pov's were at the precise time and moment.
Storyline: 10/10
It was good and I really can't wait for the rest of the chapters.
Proper Use of the English Language: 25/25
Proper Grammar/Punctuation: 10/10
It was perfect no errors.
Termonology: 5/5
Great job on the vocabulary and on the french!
Language Barrier: 10/10
No language barrier.
General Enjoyment/Last Comment: 5/5
I truly appreciate the good read and I can see where it is going. Your story kept me hooked from the very beginning to the end and I honestly want more. Hehehe~
Good luck^^
Total: 99/100
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