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REQUEST ON: 7/23/15
REVIEWER: BLACKROSESTEARS
FINISHED ON: 9/15/15
SCORE: 96/100
TITLE: (10/10)
LOGICAL (3/3) - I REALLY LOVE YOUR TITLE IN CONNECTION WITH THE WHOLE PLOT OF THE STORY BECAUSE IT FITS THE STORY JUST SO PERFECTLY. THE PATHS OF YOUR CHARACTERS AND HOW THEY ARE CONNECTED WAS SOMETHING THAT FIT THE TITLE BECAUSE THEY ARE ALL CONNECTED SOMEHOW.
EYE-CATCHING (3/3) -THE TITLE GRABBED MY ATTENTION RIGHT AWAY BECAUSE I AM ONE OF THESE PEOPLE WHO READ A TITLE AND WANT TO FIND A POSSIBLE CONNECTION WITH THE STORY AND YOUR TITLE IS INTERESTING AND CAN HAVE SO MANY MEANINGS THAT IT MADE ME CURIOUS.
ORIGINAL (4/4) - AS I ALWAYS WRITE IN MY REVIEWS, I WILL LOOK UP THE TITLE OF THE STORIES TO KNOW IF THERE WERE OTHER STORIES WITH THE SAME TITLE. I DID IT HERE TOO AND THERE WERE NO OTHER STORIES SO YOUR TITLE WAS ORIGINAL HERE BUT ALSO HOW YOU CONNECTED IT WITH THE PLOT AND THOUGHT ABOUT A TITLE THAT WOULD MAKE SENSE.
STORY'S FOREWORD/DESCRIPTION (10/10)
STORY'S SUMMARY (5/5) - YOUR DESCRIPTION CAUGHT MY ATTENTION AND BESIDES THE FACT THAT YOUR PLOT SEEMED TO BE REALLY INTERESTING AND I REALLY LIKED HOW YOU DESCRIBED THE WHOLE WORLD BEFOREHAND TO NOT CONFUSE YOUR READER BEFORE/ WHILE READING.
APPEARANCE (5/5) - YOUR FOREWORD IS ORGANIZED, YOU KNOW WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY AND HOW TO SAY IT WITHOUT REVEALING TOO MUCH.
CHARACTERS/CASTS (9/10)
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT (4/5) - YOU SURPRISED ME THROUGH THE PLOT BECAUSE OF THE WAY THEY CHARACTERS ACTED. BECAUSE ON THE ONE SIDE I HAVE TO ADMIT IT WAS KIND OF OBVIOUS THAT MINHYUN WON'T FIGHT WITH CATANNA FOREVER BECAUSE HE SEEMED TO BE VERY UNSATISFIED AND ALREADY FROM THE BEGINNING HE JUST WANTED TO GET AWAY. SO IT WAS FOR ME NOT A REAL SURPRISE THAT HE GOT HER PLACE IN THE END.
WHAT ME SURPRISED WAS ACTUALLY THE WAY IT ENDED FOR ARON AND JR BECAUSE I THOUGHT MORE INTO THE DIRECTION OF JR WILL LOVE MINHYUN AND HE WILL LOVE JR TOO SO IT WAS A SURPRISE THAT THEY DIDN'T END LIKE THAT AT ALL.
AND I LOVED THE WAY THE CHARACTERS ARE ALL CONNECTED. ON THE FIRST LOOK YOU CAN'T SEE THE CONNECTION BETWEEN THEM BUT AFTER READING MORE OF YOUR STORY YOU REVEAL IT SLOWLY JUST LIKE YOUR TITLE SAID THEY ALL HAVE TWISTED PATHS WITH EACH OTHER.
CHARACTER'S RELATIONS (5/5) - IT WAS REALLY GOOD HOW THE CHARACTERS ACTED WITH EACH OTHER BECAUSE IT WAS NOT RUSHED OR CONFUSING. THEY SEEMED LIKE REAL PEOPLE AND THE WAY THEY ACTED WITH EACH OTHER SHOWED REALLY GOOD THAT THEY HAVE DIFFERENT CHARACTERS. IT WORKED PERFECTLY WITH EACH OTHER AND SHOWED THAT YOU WERE THINKING SERIOUSLY ABOUT EVERYTHING THAT IS RELATED TO THE CHARACTERS AND THEIR RELATIONS.
THE AUTHOR'S MINDSET (39/40)
LOGICALLY (10/10) - BESIDES THE FACT THAT THERE WILL NEVER BE A PERSON TELLING ME I AM A PRINCES I THINK HOW YOU WROTE EVERYTHING IS LOGICAL BECAUSE YOU TOOK YOUR TIME TO EXPLAIN IT TO THE READER BECAUSE YOU KNOW THAT IT CAN BE A BIT CONFUSING. AND I REALLY LOVED HOW YOU CAME UP WITH PLOT TWISTS AND HOW YOU ALREADY "ANNOUNCED" THEM BECAUSE SOMETIMES YOU COULD ALREADY SAY THAT THERE IS SOMETHING UP IN THE NEXT CHAPTERS.
ORIGINALITY (9/10) - THE STORY, THE PLOT IS NOT REALLY ORIGINAL WITH A CHARACTER THAT SUDDENLY FINDS OUT THAT HE IS NOT HUMAN AND EVERYTHING BUT I NEVER READ A STORIES ABOUT FAIRIES BEFORE SO THAT MADE THE PLOT ORIGINAL AND ALSO THE WAY YOU CAME UP WITH SPELLS AND THE NAMES OF CHARACTERS AND WHAT THEY ARE MADE IT REALLY INTERESTING AND UNIQUE.
TONE (5/5) - THE TONE FITS THE STORY BECAUSE IT HAS SOMETHING MYSTERIOUS ON IT, SOMETHING DARK BUT ALSO SOME MOMENTS THAT ARE LIGHTER. IT IS NOT PURELY FIGHTING IN THE STORY.
NARRATION (5/5) - YOU WRITE YOUR CHAPTERS WITHOUT WRITING THE POV AT THE BEGINNING OF THE CHAPTERS BUT YOU DON'T NEED TO BECAUSE THERE ARE NO PROBLEMS TO FIND IT OUT WHILE READING YOUR STORY.
YOU DON'T MAKE MISTAKES LIKE YOU SUDDENLY WRITE IN ANOTHER POV WHICH COULD BE CONFUSING. IT IS REALLY SMOOTH.
STORYLINE (10/10) - AT FIRST I WAS SKEPTICAL BECAUSE YOU CHOSE NUEST AS YOUR CHARACTERS BUT THEY WERE REALLY INTERESTING AND YOUR WRITING STYLE MADE IT ALMOST IMPOSSIBLE TO STOP READING YOUR STORY. WHILE READING YOUR CHAPTERS THERE WERE QUESTIONS IN MY MIND ABOUT YOUR PLOT THAT I WAS CURIOUS ABOUT IF YOU WILL ANSWER THEM WHICH YOU DID IN THE FOLLOWING CHAPTERS WHAT GAVE ME A REASON TO READ AND TO CONTINUE TO READ. YOUR PLOT TWISTS MAKE THE STORY EVEN MORE INTERESTING. YOU DESCRIBE EVERYTHING DETAILED WHICH MADE IT EASIER FOR ME TO IMAGINE IT IN MY HEAD. THE FLOW OF THE STORY WAS NOT TOO RUSHED TO MAKE IT WEIRD AND CONFUSING WHICH IS PRETTY GOOD BECAUSE WITH YOUR OWN CREATIONS WHICH YOU USED IN THE STORY IT WOULD MAKE EVERYTHING HARDER TO UNDERSTAND.
PROPER USE OF THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE (24/25)
PROPER GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION (9/10) - I DIDN'T SAY HUGE MISTAKES IN YOUR STORY WHILE READING IT THAT WOULD MAKE IT HARD TO READ IT.
TERMINOLOGY (5/5) - YOUR VOCABULARY IS REALLY GOOD. YOU DON'T BEGIN YOUR SENTENCES WITH THE SAME WORDS AND YOU TRY TO USE DIFFERENT VOCABULARY TO MAKE IT MORE INTERESTING WHILE READING.
LANGUAGE BARRIER (10/10) - YOU DIDN'T USE KOREAN WORDS BUT MORE SOMETHING LIKE YOUR OWN LANGUAGE WHICH WAS REALLY COOL AND MADE YOUR STORY SPECIAL BECAUSE THERE ARE NOT MANY PEOPLE WHO ARE ABLE TO WORK LIKE THAT AND STICK WITH IT WITHOUT GETTING CONFUSED ABOUT IT.
REVIEWER'S ENJOYMENT (4/5)
AS I ALREADY MENTIONED I AM NOT A NUEST FAN SO I NORMALLY DON'T READ STORIES WITH THEM BUT I DON'T REGRET THIS STORY AT ALL.
IT IS INTERESTING, GOOD WRITTEN AND YOUR PLOT IS REALLY COOL. THE ONLY THING I HAVE TO ADMIT IS THAT WHILE READING I THERE WERE TIMES I HAD TO LOOK UP AGAIN THE MEANINGS OF YOUR CREATIONS BECAUSE I FORGOT AGAIN WHAT EXACTLY THEY MEAN BUT BESIDES THAT IT IS REALLY GOOD AND I ENJOYED READING IT.
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