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Author: kjdzyx

Pairing: Kaisoo
Reviewed By: kpoperrose

Requested Date: 12/00/15

Review Completion: 12/28/15
Story Link: Link
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Title: 8/10

Logical: 3/3

The title relates to the story as Kyungsoo talks about how meeting Jongin at the end of the day makes the day seem okay, great even.

Eye-catching: 1/3

When I see this title, I honestly think of a normal cliche fic so the title isn't that eye-catching.

Original: 4/4
I haven't encountered a fic with the same title.

Description/Foreword: 10/10

Summary: 5/5

It was well written so no problem here.

Appearance: 5/5
Everything was arranged neatly.

Character Development/Showcasing: 8/10

Development: 3/5

Since this was a oneshot, there wasn't much development. Kyungsoo is an office worker who's overworked and the only thing that helps him cope with his life is Jongin. 

Jongin is a homemaker who tries to make Kyungsoo smile after a hard day at work.

Relation/Cast: 5/5
The most important relation in the story is Kyungsoo and Jongin's. Their relationship is very logical as it is the perfect give and take. Kyungsoo and Jongin are willing to give their all to make the other happy and by making each other happy, they're making themselves happy as well.

Behind the Author's Mind: 39/40

Logical: 10/10

The story is relatable, especially for people who are overworked. In this case, Kyungsoo's escape from an exhausting day of work is Jongin who is waiting for him at home and has a meal prepared for him. In real life cases, a person's Jongin doesn't necessarily have to be a lover, they can also be children or a sibling who the person is trying to provide for.

Original: 9/10
It is written in a way I have never seen before. Sadly, there have been fics branched out from the same plot so I'll have to deduct points.

 
Tone: 5/5
The story was written in an angsty, sophisticated and desperate tone which matches the genre of the story.

Naration: 5/5

The story was written in a consistent tense and a third point of view.

Storyline: 10/10
The storyline was smooth and it didn't drag on so full marks here.

Proper Use of the English Language: 24/25

Proper Grammar/Punctuation: 10/10

There were no noticeable grammar mistakes.

Terminology: 4/5
The vocabulary was pretty expanded.

Language Barrier: 10/10
There were no overused Korean phrases.

General Enjoyment/Last Comment: 5/5
I enjoyed this story a lot as it depicted the life of a working person perfectly. 

Total points: 94/100

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