Press Play - 2kinalo
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NOTE: one-shot
(10/10) Title: Very unique. It means a lot "behind the scenes".
(10/10) Character: They matched their descriptions and adapted to their surroundings like actual real people.
(9/10) Originality: It was a very good twist and nice idea of , but it was also cliche. But still very good cliche.
(39/40) Storyline/Plot: What's with you and sicknesses?! JK, it was a very good plot. I liked the beginning the best. it's a nice flow.
(24/25) Grammar/Errors: RE-READ, there were typos, but it was good other than that. There was also that one time when you should write the dialogue then put commas instead of a period. You kind of changed the time tense from time to time also.
(4/5) Overall Enjoyment:I thought it was great, but the woman was too evil and black hearted that she forced me to take a point off.
(96/100) Points Total
Bonus: Good one-shot and openning scene.
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Review for: 2kinalo
Requested on: 2/11/2015
Finished On: 2/12/2015
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