Requestor's Username: Kaihlee Lo
Reviewer's Username: deedee_zelo90
Date Story Reviewed was: November 7, 2016
Received & Completed: November 08, 2016

Title (10/10): For the title you chosen Concealed Identity, which is not overly used. For that I am giving you extra points because nobody would even bother to read stories which titles are overused readers just tend to abandon it if they don’t found interesting. I found your title very alluring and mysterious, I had many questions in my head, and it made me to continue reading your story.

Character (10/10): You have shocked me in good sense, after I read how many characters you had. You manage 58 characters, you managed to develop every each of them. No any reader don’t know exactly how to develop his characters, he/she either focuses on one or two. As i already said, the character development is more than okay. You take your time to develop every each character and let him/she tell his own story. The character that surprised me was Heo Yoomi. At first, she gives impression of good and kind girl, but it turns out she lied Inpyo. We learn later on that she killed King, Heo Minho’s father, with her tea. Why? To become Queen.

Originality (10/10): The plot of your story is original, you didn’t use cliche-like plots which I am giving you kudos for. For me it is something very fresh and new. I am er for history dramas, and with this story of yours you "pasted" me for my sit from the bgining 'till the end.

Storyline/Plot (39/40): Like I said in originality, your story is fresh and new. You planned everything out from the begining, you haven't rushed anything. It is something very refeshing. I had a feeling like I am watching a real drama, and after every chapter I wanted to know more. I took one point only because the story isn't finished.

Grammar/Errors (25/25): The grammar is perfection, you used english very well, even if English isn't your first language I wouldn't even know. I am er for detailed description and for descriptive words, and you have all that. That's why I gave you high mark.

Overall Enjoyment (5/5): I am very honoured for reading and reviewing your story I hope I'll get to see what is going to happen with characters. I do want to see how your storyline is going to play out. I desperately want to see some happy ending for Inpyo ;)

Bonus: N/A
Points Total: (99/100)

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