Do you believe in fate? - hephaistos
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A.U. : HEPHAISTOS
REQUEST ON: 8/10/15
REVIEWER: EUNRIEHYUN
FINISHED ON: 8/11/15
SCORE: 90/100
TITLE: (10/10)
THE TITLE SEEMED FRESH AND ORIGINAL.
I QUIET THOUGHT THE STORY WOULD BE ABOUT A PLAYFUL COUPLE WHO WOULD MEET BY THE TIES OF FATE,BUT YOU SURPRISE ME WITH THE OUTCOME.
OUTSTANDING!
STORY'S FOREWORD/DESCRIPTION (10/10)
IT WAS SHORT BUT INFORMATIVE.
AT FIRST SIGHT IT MADE ME CURIOUS,YOU LEFT ME THINKING ABOUT WHY A BURNING HOUSE? I WAS ALREADY THINKING ABOUT OTHER SIMILARITIES IN RELATION WITH 'A BURNING HOUSE',BUT THEN I LISTEN TO THE SONG YOU SUGGESTED YOUR READERS TO LISTEN AS THE STORY WENT AND... I FELT IT.
CHARACTERS/CASTS (10/10)
I LOVED MARK'S CHARACTER!! AND THE WAY OF BEING WITH YOUNG-AH.
THE AUTHOR'S MINDSET (40/40)
YOUR STORY WAS BEAUTIFUL,ALTHOUGH THE SONG MADE IT MORE SADDER THAN THE TEXT.
I READ THE STORY WITHOUT THE SONG AND IT WAS SAD,BUT IT DIDN'T MADE FEEL SAD,NOR DID I PETTY THE CHARACTERS.
BUT WHEN I READ IT WITH THE SONG,IT WAS LIKE "WOW!!" AND IT MADE ME ALMOST TEAR UP.
PROPER USE OF THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE (15/25)
YOU HAD JUST A LITTLE GRAMMAR AND SPELLING ISSUES.
CHANGE 'COARSER' TO 'HORASE'
REVIEWER'S ENJOYMENT (5/5)
I ENJOY READING THE STORY,IT MADE MY HEART SQUISH,(IT'S GOOD,IT MEANS YOU ACTUALLY NAIL THE GENRES).
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